Names— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more coherent by using complete sentences and linking words. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant phrases. For example, directly state the meaning of your name and who chose it, then add a brief explanation.

예시: My name is Vismaya, which means 'amazing' in Malayalam. My father chose this name because it reflects our Indian culture, and I really like its meaning.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Focus on giving a direct response with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: If I have children, I would prefer to choose names from Indian culture because I want to preserve our traditions and heritage.

제안: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid confusing phrases and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No one in my family has the same name as me. My father chose a rare name for me because he wanted something unique. However, some of my neighbors have similar names.

제안: Improve clarity by using complete sentences and linking words. Provide a clear comparison between past and present naming practices with specific examples.

예시: I think in the past, Chinese people used traditional official names, which can be hard to pronounce. Nowadays, they often use nicknames or simpler names to make communication easier, especially with people from other countries.

제안: Try to give a more structured answer by stating what you know and adding examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: I am not sure which names are most popular in China. However, I have noticed that some of my Chinese friends have simple English names like Apple, Candy, or Cindy, which seem easy to remember.

× It's means amazing.

✓ It means amazing.

The verb 'means' should be used in its base form 'mean' after 'It' as the subject. 'It's' is a contraction of 'It is', which is incorrect here. The correct sentence is 'It means amazing.'

× My father chose the name for me and I like I think it's a meaning is amazing in Malayalam itself.

✓ My father chose the name for me, and I think its meaning is amazing in Malayalam itself.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'I like I think' is incorrect and should be 'I think'. Also, 'it's a meaning is' is redundant; 'its meaning is' is correct. Proper commas and conjunctions improve clarity.

× Malala miss my mother attack.

✓ My mother calls me Malala miss.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to be a misconstructed phrase. Assuming the intended meaning is that the mother calls the student 'Malala miss', the sentence is corrected accordingly for clarity and grammar.

× Asian Indian set preferring names in Indian culture makes Sander.

✓ Asian Indians prefer choosing names from Indian culture.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Set preferring' is incorrect; 'prefer choosing' is appropriate. 'Makes Sander' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× My story. I think. Unrelated to over. August I think.

✓ I think my story is unrelated to that.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining fragments into a coherent sentence improves understanding.

× I don't my name is Annette rare and choose to buy my father.

✓ I don't. My name is quite rare and was chosen by my father.

The original sentence lacks verbs and proper pronouns. 'I don't' is incomplete; adding a period and completing the thought improves clarity. 'Choose to buy' is incorrect; 'was chosen by' is correct passive form.

× My father was very particular about as such thing said my daughter name must be a rare unknown has to process this as the same honey miss my daughter but there is no all named like me in my family but some of my neighbors however at the similar name as.

✓ My father was very particular about such things and said my daughter's name must be rare and unique. There is no one with the same name as me in my family, but some of my neighbors have similar names.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear phrases. Breaking it into clear sentences and correcting grammar improves readability and meaning.

× I don't have a much more idea about that, but to my knowledge is correct.

✓ I don't have much idea about that, but to my knowledge, it is correct.

'A much more idea' is incorrect; 'much idea' is correct. Also, 'to my knowledge is correct' lacks a subject; adding 'it' clarifies the sentence.

× The Chinese person has to name only is their traditional official name.

✓ A Chinese person has only their traditional official name as their name.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Rephrasing clarifies that a Chinese person has only their traditional official name.

× Other is there nickname that is using to communicate easily communicate with the person in other countries that because they are traditional name is very difficult to pronounce.

✓ Others have nicknames that are used to communicate easily with people in other countries because their traditional names are very difficult to pronounce.

The original sentence has pronoun errors and awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns and sentence structure improves clarity.

× That's why they're choosing some easy.

✓ That's why they choose some easy names.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a noun after 'easy'. Adding 'names' completes the sentence and corrects tense.

× Actually, I don't know about that.

✓ Actually, I don't know about that.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× And most of my Chinese friends house and a simple name like Apple, candy, Cindy, like simple, simple names, I don't know they're actually and I don't know which name is very common and which name is not even I don't know their actual names.

✓ Most of my Chinese friends have simple names like Apple, Candy, and Cindy. I don't know which names are very common and which are not, and I don't even know their actual names.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear phrases. Breaking it into clear sentences and correcting grammar improves readability and meaning.