Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'in my childhood' and 'I liked to solve it', you can combine ideas more smoothly and use past tense consistently.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles as a child, especially Sudoku. I always looked forward to the weekend newspapers because they included Sudoku puzzles that I loved solving.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use consistent tense and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I like to do puzzles every day because they help keep my mind sharp and improve my ability to make quick decisions, even when I have a busy schedule.

제안: Your answer is good but contains minor errors such as repeated words and subject-verb agreement issues. Try to use linking words to contrast ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: I enjoy both word and number puzzles; however, number puzzles are easier for me since I am good at math. On the other hand, word puzzles are a bit more challenging but still enjoyable because I love solving puzzles.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same words.

예시: Yes, I believe puzzles are very beneficial for older people because they keep them engaged and help improve and maintain their memory.

× I always looked forward to the weekend newspapers where I can find the Sudoku and I liked to solve it.

✓ I always looked forward to the weekend newspapers where I could find the Sudoku and I liked to solve it.

The sentence mixes past tense 'looked' and 'liked' with present tense 'can find'. To maintain consistent past tense, 'can find' should be changed to 'could find'.

× I took I take time out of my busy schedule to do puzzles because I think it helps me in keeping my mind sharp and taking spontaneous decisions.

✓ I take time out of my busy schedule to do puzzles because I think it helps me in keeping my mind sharp and taking spontaneous decisions.

The phrase 'I took I take' is incorrect and redundant. Since the sentence is about a habitual action, present tense 'I take' is appropriate. Remove 'I took' to correct the sentence.

× Word puzzle on the other hand, are a little difficult, but they are also very enjoyable for me because I love doing puzzles.

✓ Word puzzles, on the other hand, are a little difficult, but they are also very enjoyable for me because I love doing puzzles.

'Word puzzle' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural. To agree in number, 'Word puzzles' (plural) should be used.