Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more organized. Start with a direct response, then add details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood. My aunt introduced us to puzzles and often encouraged us to solve them. I usually did puzzles together with my cousin, which made it more fun and engaging.

제안: Make your answer more concise and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use correct tense and grammar to improve clarity.

예시: I don't do puzzles anymore, but when I was young, I used to solve puzzles every morning after waking up. It usually took me less than three minutes to finish one.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more confident. Structure your answer clearly by stating your preference and explaining why with specific reasons. Use appropriate vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

예시: I prefer word puzzles because they help me improve my vocabulary and familiarity with English words. I find number puzzles more difficult since they require more calculation skills.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct opinion, then explain your reasons using linking words. Use simple and accurate vocabulary to express your ideas effectively.

예시: I think doing puzzles is one of the best activities for older people because it helps maintain or even improve their memory. It can prevent memory deterioration and keep their minds active.

× Yes, I did my aunt vessels and introduced to us how to play it and as far as I could remember she is she was asking us to solve those puzzles and we also did with my together with my cousin.

✓ Yes, my aunt gave us puzzles and introduced us to how to play them, and as far as I can remember, she was asking us to solve those puzzles and we also did them together with my cousin.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Did my aunt vessels' is incorrect; it should be 'my aunt gave us puzzles'. 'Introduced to us' should be 'introduced us to'. 'She is she was asking' is redundant; only past tense 'she was asking' is needed. 'We also did with my together with my cousin' is unclear; corrected to 'we also did them together with my cousin'. These corrections fix past tense usage and sentence clarity.

× Today I don't do puzzles anymore, but when I was young I always did the puzzle so, and I think that's every morning when I wake up I will I would get my puzzle and then solve it in just three minutes or less.

✓ Today I don't do puzzles anymore, but when I was young I always did puzzles, and I think every morning when I woke up I would get my puzzle and then solve it in just three minutes or less.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I think that's every morning when I wake up' should be 'I think every morning when I woke up' to maintain past tense consistency. 'I will I would get' is redundant; 'I would get' is correct for past habitual action. Also, 'did the puzzle so' is awkward; corrected to 'did puzzles'. These changes ensure proper tense usage and clarity.

× Uh oh, yes, umm, I should. I would say that I like word puzzles because it enhances my word. Umm umm, I mean it didn't access my my familiarization with words, especially in English, so.

✓ Uh oh, yes, umm, I would say that I like word puzzles because they enhance my vocabulary. Umm, I mean it helps my familiarization with words, especially in English.

The original sentence uses 'it' to refer to 'word puzzles', which is plural, so 'they' is correct. 'Enhances my word' is unclear; 'enhance my vocabulary' is more appropriate. 'Didn't access my my familiarization' is incorrect; 'helps my familiarization' is correct. These corrections fix pronoun agreement and improve clarity.

× I think who one of the best activities that people can do so that it will not deteriorate their memory, but rather increase or just stabilize, if not decrease, just stabilize there.

✓ I think it is one of the best activities that people can do so that their memory will not deteriorate, but rather increase or at least stabilize.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing. 'I think who one of the best activities' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it is one of the best activities'. 'So that it will not deteriorate their memory' is unclear; corrected to 'so that their memory will not deteriorate'. The ending 'if not decrease, just stabilize there' is confusing; simplified to 'or at least stabilize'. These changes improve sentence structure and clarity.