Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は全体的に良いですが、「program solving skills」は「problem solving skills」の誤りと思われます。また、文のつながりをより自然にするために接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。具体的な例や感情を加えるとさらに良くなります。

예시: Yes, I did a lot of puzzles like crossword puzzles when I was a child. They were enjoyable and helped me improve my English and critical thinking skills. Moreover, they stimulated my curiosity, which made learning more fun.

제안: 「apostles」は誤りで「puzzles」と言いたいと思われます。また、「crossbar puzzles」も「crossword puzzles」が正しいです。文法的な誤りが多いので、正しい単語を使い、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

예시: I often do puzzles when I have free time. For example, I try to solve crossword puzzles while taking public transportation because it is fun and helps me pass the time.

제안: 「sobbing number process」は意味が不明で、「solving number puzzles」が正しいと思われます。語彙の誤用が多いので、正しい単語を覚え、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

예시: I enjoy solving number puzzles because I am good at mathematics. However, I find word puzzles more difficult since I don't read many books.

제안: 「what puzzles」は誤りで「word puzzles」など具体的に言いましょう。また、「helps other people to keep their intellectual levels」は不自然なので、「helps older people maintain their mental abilities」など自然な表現にしましょう。

예시: Yes, I believe that solving puzzles helps older people maintain their mental abilities. For example, my father solves word puzzles and practices critical thinking every day.

× I enjoyed them and they improved my English skills, critical thinking skills and program solving skills.

✓ I enjoyed them and they improved my English skills, critical thinking skills, and problem-solving skills.

The phrase 'program solving skills' is incorrect; the correct term is 'problem-solving skills' which is a compound noun describing the ability to solve problems. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list of three or more items (Oxford comma) for clarity.

× I often do apostles when I have free time.

✓ I often do puzzles when I have free time.

The word 'apostles' is a mishearing or typo; the correct plural noun is 'puzzles' which fits the context of the conversation about doing puzzles.

× For example when I take public transportation I try to solve crossbar puzzles and this is fun for me and kill time.

✓ For example, when I take public transportation, I try to solve crossword puzzles; this is fun for me and kills time.

The phrase 'crossbar puzzles' is incorrect; the correct term is 'crossword puzzles'. Also, 'kill time' should be 'kills time' to agree with the singular subject 'this'. Commas are added for clarity.

× I enjoy sobbing number process because I'm good at mathematics.

✓ I enjoy solving number puzzles because I'm good at mathematics.

The phrase 'sobbing number process' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'solving number puzzles'. 'Sobbing' is a wrong word here, and 'process' should be 'puzzles' to match the context.

× Yes, I believe that solving puzzles helps other people to keep their intellectual levels.

✓ Yes, I believe that solving puzzles helps older people to keep their intellectual levels.

The word 'other' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'older' to refer to elderly people as per the question. 'Other people' is too general and does not fit the context.

× For example, my father tried to solve what puzzles and think critically every day.

✓ For example, my father tries to solve word puzzles and think critically every day.

The phrase 'what puzzles' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'word puzzles'. Also, 'tried' should be 'tries' to match the present tense context of a habitual action.

× For example, my father tried to solve what puzzles and think critically every day.

✓ For example, my father tries to solve word puzzles and think critically every day.

The verb 'tried' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so it should be in present tense 'tries'.

× this is fun for me and kill time.

✓ this is fun for me and kills time.

The verb 'kill' does not agree with the singular subject 'this'; it should be 'kills'.