Puzzles— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoiding redundancy. For example, focus on your experience with puzzles and your mother's interest without repeating words or mixing unrelated ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles as a child. I often bought puzzles like Ziggles and Disney-themed ones. My mother also liked puzzles, so we sometimes did them together.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains repeated words and unclear phrases. Try to give a complete, coherent answer with linking words to explain when and why you do puzzles.

예시: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, especially on rainy days. For instance, if the weather is bad, I stay in my room and spend time solving puzzles to pass the time.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Try to use correct grammar and avoid filler words to make your answer more fluent and natural.

예시: I prefer word puzzles because I find number puzzles quite difficult. Since I don't enjoy calculations, number puzzles can be stressful for me.

제안: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Make sure to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Explain why puzzles are beneficial for elderly people with specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe puzzles are good for elderly people because they help keep the brain active and improve memory. For example, my grandfather often does puzzles to stay mentally sharp.

× I did eat with my mommy mommy because my mom and likes puzzle too.

✓ I ate with my mommy because my mom likes puzzles too.

The phrase 'did eat' is unnecessary here; the simple past tense 'ate' is sufficient. Also, 'mommy mommy' is repetitive and should be 'mommy'. 'Likes' is correct for third person singular, but 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match the context.

× I did eat with my mommy mommy because my mom and likes puzzle too.

✓ I ate with my mommy because my mom likes puzzles too.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly placed between 'my mom' and 'likes'. It should be removed to form a correct sentence.

× I often do puzzles when I feel bored. Up. For instance, if it if it is rainy, rainy rainy day, I often do puzzles in my room. Because it is.

✓ I often do puzzles when I feel bored. For instance, if it is a rainy day, I often do puzzles in my room.

The sentence contains repeated words ('Up.', 'if it if it', 'rainy rainy rainy') and incomplete sentences ('Because it is.'). These should be removed or corrected to form coherent sentences.

× I like doing word puzzles. Uh, I think number puzzles is very difficult for me because.

✓ I like doing word puzzles. Uh, I think number puzzles are very difficult for me because.

'Number puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I don't like calculate so the number puzzles is very stressful for me.

✓ I don't like to calculate, so number puzzles are very stressful for me.

After 'like', the infinitive form 'to calculate' is correct rather than the base verb 'calculate'. Also, 'number puzzles' is plural, so 'are' should be used instead of 'is'.

× the number puzzles is very stressful for me.

✓ number puzzles are very stressful for me.

'Number puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I think it is good for all the people to do puzzles.

✓ I think it is good for all people to do puzzles.

'All people' is more natural and idiomatic than 'all the people' in this context.

× Because doing puzzles help our lanes more.

✓ Because doing puzzles helps our brains more.

'Doing puzzles' is a gerund phrase and should be followed by a singular verb 'helps'. Also, 'lanes' is incorrect; the intended word is 'brains'.

× so my grand father usually do puzzles.

✓ so my grandfather usually does puzzles.

'Grandfather' is one word. 'Usually' indicates habitual action in the present, so the verb should be 'does' for third person singular.