Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and by providing a bit more specific details about the culture or places.

예시: My hometown is Kathmandu, which is a busy city. However, it is rich in culture, offering traditional festivals and historic temples, and it also has delicious local food and many beautiful places to visit, such as the Pashupatinath Temple and Durbar Square.

제안: Your answer has good points but contains hesitations and some unclear phrasing. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your sentences more concise and coherent by using linking words and clearer expressions.

예시: I really like the blend of modern and traditional lifestyles in my hometown. Moreover, the people are friendly, and the familiar environment makes it comfortable to live in. Additionally, the community is supportive, which helps residents in many ways.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by directly answering the question with a clear time frame and using linking words to explain your situation more naturally.

예시: I have lived in Kathmandu all my life, so I am there every day. Even when I travel, I usually return quite often because it is my permanent home.

제안: Your answer is positive but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your points clearer and more structured.

예시: Yes, definitely, my hometown is a good place for young people because it offers many facilities that support their studies. Furthermore, young people can gain valuable experiences and learn new skills through various programs and activities available in the city.

× here is so many people

✓ there are so many people

The phrase 'here is so many people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and requires the plural form of the verb 'to be', which is 'are'. Also, 'here' should be followed by 'are' when referring to plural nouns. The correct phrase is 'there are so many people'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and proper use of 'there be' structure.

× which uh, they can help us

✓ who can help us

The relative pronoun 'which' is used for things, not people. Since 'people' is the antecedent, the correct relative pronoun is 'who'. Also, 'uh' is a filler and should be omitted in formal speech. The corrected phrase is 'who can help us'.

× my hometown is good place for young people

✓ my hometown is a good place for young people

The phrase 'good place' is a singular countable noun phrase and requires an article. The indefinite article 'a' should be used before 'good place'. This corrects the article usage and singular noun phrase.

× which will help for their studies

✓ which will help their studies

The verb 'help' is directly followed by the object without a preposition. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'help their studies'.

× they can also learn many things and experience

✓ they can also learn many things and gain experience

The word 'experience' in this context is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by a verb like 'gain' to make the sentence clear. The original sentence lacks a verb before 'experience', making it incomplete. Adding 'gain' clarifies the meaning.