Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Where is your hometown?
수험생
I come from Vietnam when I was born and bred in Hanoi, but actually umm I have been living in a small village on the escorts of Hanoi for the best part of 16 years.
시험관
What do you like about your home town?
수험생
One thing that I really love my hometown is for its unique cuisine. In my hometown there's a dish called named Nuong which is one thing that my village is very renowned for and each year there are many tourist flock to taste them.
시험관
How long have you lived there?
수험생
I have been living in my out in my village for the best part of 16 years. I chose to leave here because the atmosphere is much fresher and quieter compared to the busy city center, which makes it a more comfortable place to relax and enjoy nature.
시험관
Is your home town a good place for young people?
수험생
Well, my hometown is on the outskirts of city center, so maybe there are not as many umm, career opportunities as in city center, but it's also a wonderful place to live. Is uh, the junk store went under the pressure of work?
평가
총점
Part 1
Where is your hometown?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'escorts' thay vì 'outskirts'. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và đúng ngữ pháp.
예시: I was born and raised in Hanoi, Vietnam, but I have been living in a small village on the outskirts of Hanoi for the past 16 years.
What do you like about your home town?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác. Nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về món ăn.
예시: One thing I really love about my hometown is its unique cuisine. For example, there is a famous dish called Nuong, which my village is renowned for, and every year many tourists come to taste it.
How long have you lived there?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ('leave' thay vì 'live'). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I have been living in my village for almost 16 years. I chose to live here because the atmosphere is fresher and quieter than the busy city center, making it a comfortable place to relax and enjoy nature.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có phần lộn xộn, không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể.
예시: My hometown is on the outskirts of the city, so there are fewer career opportunities compared to the city center. However, it is a peaceful and pleasant place for young people to live and enjoy a good quality of life.
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