Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ và tự nhiên, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý tránh dùng những từ không chính xác như 'history signs' nên thay bằng 'historical sites' để chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn một chút để tránh dài dòng.

예시: My hometown is Guantanam Province, located in central Vietnam. It is a large coastal area famous for its beautiful beaches and historical sites like an ancient town. The region is culturally rich and attracts many tourists annually.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời rất tốt với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể chia thành hai câu để dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'since' để kết nối ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: What I like most about my hometown is the people because they are very friendly and hospitable. For example, neighbors often come together to support those in need, which makes the community close-knit and welcoming.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng hơi dài và có câu phức tạp chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên chia câu dài thành các câu ngắn hơn và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I have lived in my hometown for more than 28 years, spending most of my childhood and high school there. However, I moved to a nearby city for university. I often return on weekends to visit my family and friends because I enjoy the atmosphere.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'who wanna' nên dùng 'who want to' và câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh dùng từ lóng và kết thúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Actually, my hometown is the second biggest province, but it is not a good place for young people who want to find professional jobs. There are limited opportunities for those with higher education, so it is more suitable for manual labor or skilled trades. Therefore, young people seeking career growth often move to bigger cities.

× The area is also rich in culture and attracts many tourists every year.

✓ The area is also rich in culture and attracts many tourists every year.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to prepositions or other listed types.

× What I like the most about my hometown is the people.

✓ What I like the most about my hometown is the people.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to pronouns or other listed types.

× Even though I often returned to my hometown on weekends to visit my family and catch up with old friends because I really enjoy the atmosphere here.

✓ I often returned to my hometown on weekends to visit my family and catch up with old friends because I really enjoy the atmosphere here.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Even though' at the beginning, which creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'Even though' corrects the sentence structure.

× Actually, my hometown is the second biggest province, but it's not a very good place for young people who wanna find professional jobs.

✓ Actually, my hometown is the second biggest province, but it's not a very good place for young people who want to find professional jobs.

The word 'wanna' is informal and incorrect in formal speech or writing. It should be replaced with 'want to' for proper grammar.

× There are limited job opportunities for those who with higher education, so it is more suitable for people who work in manual labor or skilled trades.

✓ There are limited job opportunities for those with higher education, so it is more suitable for people who work in manual labor or skilled trades.

The phrase 'for those who with higher education' is incorrect. The word 'who' should be removed to correctly say 'for those with higher education'.

× However, young people looking for career growth might need to move to the.

✓ However, young people looking for career growth might need to move to the city.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'city' or an appropriate noun completes the sentence and corrects the structure.