Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer provides good information but can be made more natural and concise. Instead of '30 kilometer away from Vadodara', say '30 kilometres from Vadodara'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'the West part of the India' – simply say 'western India'.

예시: My hometown is Anand, which is about 30 kilometres from Vadodara, located in western India, specifically in the state of Gujarat.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more specific about the facilities and explain why you like them. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I like the good infrastructure in my hometown, such as hospitals and community centres, because they provide quick help and warm hospitality whenever needed.

제안: Your answer is short and has a tense error. Use present perfect tense for actions continuing to the present. Also, add a little more detail to enrich your response.

예시: I have lived in my hometown since I was born, so I know the place very well.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, be more specific about the facilities and their benefits for young people.

예시: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it has many facilities, such as play zones and parks, where both young people and adults can relax and enjoy their free time.

× My hometown is Anand which is 30 kilometer away from Vadodara and it is located at the West part of the India, in particular in Gujarat state.

✓ My hometown is Anand which is 30 kilometers away from Vadodara and it is located in the western part of India, particularly in the Gujarat state.

The word 'kilometer' should be plural 'kilometers' because it refers to a distance greater than one. Also, 'at the West part of the India' is incorrect; it should be 'in the western part of India' because we use 'in' for locations and 'western' as the adjective form. Additionally, 'the India' is incorrect; 'India' does not need a definite article here.

× In my hometown, there are a lot of infrastructure facilities available, so it is the best part of my town because whenever we need help, we can immediately go to there or received our hospitality.

✓ In my hometown, there are a lot of infrastructure facilities available, so it is the best part of my town because whenever we need help, we can immediately go there or receive our hospitality.

The phrase 'go to there' is incorrect; 'there' does not need the preposition 'to' before it. Also, 'received' should be 'receive' to match the present tense context. The plural 'facilities' is correct here.

× Since I was born, I lived in my hometown.

✓ Since I was born, I have lived in my hometown.

The phrase 'Since I was born' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. Therefore, 'I lived' should be corrected to 'I have lived'.

× Yes, it is good place for young people because there are many facilities available in my town like a play zone or there are many park where adults tend to go and relax their mind.

✓ Yes, it is a good place for young people because there are many facilities available in my town like a play zone or there are many parks where adults tend to go and relax their minds.

The phrase 'good place' needs the article 'a' before 'good place'. 'Many park' should be plural 'many parks' because it refers to multiple parks. Also, 'relax their mind' should be 'relax their minds' to agree with the plural subject 'adults'.