Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз иборалар бор. Шаҳарингизни аниқ ва тўғри тасвирлаш учун, жумла тузилишига эътибор беринг ва рақамларни тўғри ифодалаинг.

예시: My hometown is a small city located in the southern part of the Tashkent region, with a population of about 1,130,000 people.

제안: Жавобингизда мазмун ва грамматик хатолар бор, шунингдек, тушунарсиз иборалар мавжуд. Сиз шаҳарингиз ҳақида аниқ ва мантиқий маълумот беришингиз керак.

예시: I like that my hometown has many affordable things, for example, public transportation is cheap, and you can travel around the city for a low cost.

제안: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар бор, айниқса вақтни ифодалашда. Тўғри грамматик шакллардан фойдаланинг ва жумла тузилишини яхшилашга ҳаракат қилинг.

예시: I have been living here since I was born, about 20 years, and I think I will continue to live here.

제안: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз иборалар бор. Мазмунни аниқ ва тўғри ифодалаш учун, сабабларни аниқ ва мантиқий тарзда тушунтиринг.

예시: I don't think it is a good place for young people because, although it has many facilities, there is a lot of air and noise pollution.

× My hometown is on my lake which is small city and located in South in the South of Tashkent region and has got 1130 thousand people.

✓ My hometown is on a lake; it is a small city located in the south of the Tashkent region and has a population of 1,130,000 people.

The original sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'my lake' which should be 'a lake' to indicate one lake, and 'small city' needs an article 'a'. Also, 'in South in the South' is redundant and incorrect preposition usage. 'Has got 1130 thousand people' is awkward; 'has a population of 1,130,000 people' is clearer. Use singular/plural forms correctly and appropriate articles.

× My hometown is on my lake which is small city and located in South in the South of Tashkent region and has got 1130 thousand people.

✓ My hometown is on a lake; it is a small city located in the south of the Tashkent region and has a population of 1,130,000 people.

The phrase 'located in South in the South' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in the south' to indicate location. Avoid repeating prepositions unnecessarily.

× Al Malik has Al Malik full of good things such as cheaper things like if you want to move to another place in the in the city you can move for 2000 songs.

✓ Al Malik is full of good things, such as cheaper goods; for example, if you want to move to another place in the city, you can do so for 2000 soms.

The phrase 'Al Malik has Al Malik full of good things' is incorrect; 'Al Malik is full of good things' is correct. 'Cheaper things' should be 'cheaper goods' or 'items'. 'Move for 2000 songs' is unclear; likely 'move for 2000 soms' (currency) is intended. Correct singular/plural forms and word choice.

× I am living here from my birthday, about 20 years and I think I continued to living there.

✓ I have been living here since my birthday, about 20 years, and I think I will continue living here.

The present continuous 'I am living' is incorrect for an action started in the past and continuing; present perfect continuous 'I have been living' is correct. 'From my birthday' should be 'since my birthday'. 'I continued to living' is incorrect; it should be 'I will continue living' to express future intention.

× I I think definitely no because I'm only has got a lot of facilities and there are air pollution, noise pollution and other pollutions.

✓ I definitely think no because it only has a few facilities, and there is air pollution, noise pollution, and other types of pollution.

The phrase 'I'm only has got' is incorrect; 'it only has' is correct referring to the town. 'A lot of facilities' contradicts the negative context; likely 'few facilities' is intended. 'Pollutions' is uncountable; use 'pollution' or 'types of pollution'. Correct pronoun use and noun forms.