Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'my hometown' twice in the same sentence and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide a bit more specific detail about the historical significance or the sweets to enrich your answer.

예시: My hometown, Munshivas, is located near Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh. It is historically significant and well-known for its delicious potatoes and traditional sweets like roshogolla.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is coherent and relevant to the question.

예시: What I like most about my hometown is its peaceful environment and friendly people. Additionally, the area is famous for its beautiful rivers, which add to the natural charm of the village.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and lacks clarity. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about your time living there, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I was born and raised in Munshigan, where I lived until I completed my SSC. After that, I moved to Dhaka for higher studies, so I have spent about half of my life in my hometown.

제안: Your answer is relevant but somewhat vague and contains unclear phrases. Try to be more specific about the activities and developments that benefit young people. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, my hometown is a great place for young people because it offers various recreational activities and has developed modern facilities, such as internet access and community centers, which support both educational and personal growth.

× My hometown is Munshivas, which is quite near to Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh.

✓ My hometown is Munshivas, which is quite near Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near Dhaka' without 'to'.

× I like about my hometown is the people of our home village and the environment of our village this is The environment in our village is so peaceful and the people are so friendly and the Micron is mainly famous for the rivers, so the.

✓ What I like about my hometown is the people of our village and the environment. The environment in our village is very peaceful, and the people are very friendly. The area is mainly famous for its rivers.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It contains run-on sentences and unclear references. Rewriting into clear, complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I born in Munshigan and I grew up there.

✓ I was born in Munshigan and I grew up there.

The verb 'born' requires the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past passive voice. 'I born' is incorrect; it should be 'I was born'.

× I live my half of my life in there.

✓ I lived half of my life there.

The sentence refers to a past period, so the past tense 'lived' should be used instead of the present tense 'live'. Also, 'in there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient.

× After my SSC, I came to Dhaka for my higher study but before that I was a student there in Murugan and I live my half of my life in there.

✓ After my SSC, I came to Dhaka for my higher studies, but before that, I was a student in Munshigan and lived half of my life there.

The phrase 'higher study' should be 'higher studies'. The preposition 'in' is used correctly with 'Munshigan'. Also, 'live my half of my life in there' is incorrect; it should be 'lived half of my life there'.

× There are so many activities and nowadays it's developed a lot so that young people can do whatever they want to do, like technological and personal uses, and it says so.

✓ There are many activities, and nowadays it has developed a lot so that young people can do whatever they want, like using technology and pursuing personal interests.

The phrase 'like technological and personal uses' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'like using technology and pursuing personal interests'. Also, 'it says so' is unclear and unnecessary.