Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct prepositions and articles, and avoid grammatical errors. For example, say "located in the center of China" and "which is famous for its vibrant culture and developed transport." Also, make your sentence more natural by combining ideas smoothly.

예시: My hometown is Wuhan, which is located in the center of China and is famous for its vibrant culture and well-developed transportation system.

제안: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., "a remarkable building" instead of "buildings." Also, avoid repetition by combining sentences and adding linking words for coherence.

예시: I really like the landscapes in my hometown, especially the Yellow Crane Tower, which is a famous and remarkable symbol of the city.

제안: Pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement, for example, "my father and my mother were working" and "I studied in the city." Also, try to make your answer more concise and natural by combining related ideas.

예시: I have lived in Wuhan for 12 years since I was born and raised there. Both my parents worked in the city, and I studied there as well.

제안: Use more natural expressions and correct word forms, such as "developing" instead of "very developing," and "good opportunities for careers." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Of course, I think my hometown is a good place for young people because it is developing and modern. Moreover, there are many good career opportunities, and the city's slow pace helps people feel relaxed.

× My hometown is Wuhan. It's located in central of China, which famous with its vibrant culture and developed transport.

✓ My hometown is Wuhan. It's located in the central part of China, which is famous for its vibrant culture and developed transport.

The phrase 'in central of China' is incorrect; it should be 'in the central part of China' to correctly use the preposition and article. Also, 'which famous with' is incorrect; it should be 'which is famous for' to properly use the verb and preposition.

× It's a remarkable buildings of the city's symbol.

✓ It's a remarkable building and a symbol of the city.

The word 'buildings' is plural but preceded by 'a', which is singular. Also, the phrase 'of the city's symbol' is awkward; it should be 'a symbol of the city' for correct possessive and meaning.

× My father and my mother was working in this town and I was study in the city.

✓ My father and my mother were working in this town and I was studying in the city.

The subject 'My father and my mother' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Also, 'I was study' is incorrect; it should be 'I was studying' to use the correct past continuous tense.

× I think my hometown is a good place for young people because it's very developing and modern.

✓ I think my hometown is a good place for young people because it's very developed and modern.

The adjective 'developing' describes something in the process of development, but here the intended meaning is that the city is already developed, so 'developed' is the correct adjective.