Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và chính xác về vị trí quê hương. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nhầm lẫn giữa địa điểm và các đặc điểm văn hóa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: My hometown is a small city in the north of Vietnam. It is famous for its rich culture and delicious seafood dishes.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác hoặc khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về những điều bạn thích.

예시: I love my hometown because it has beautiful natural scenery and a peaceful atmosphere. Moreover, the local cuisine is very special and delicious.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: I have lived in my hometown for nearly 18 years since I was born and raised there.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

예시: I don't think my hometown is ideal for young people because it is a small village with limited opportunities. Most young people prefer to live in big cities where there are more activities and jobs.

× Currently I have been living in Taiwan, located in the north of Vietnam and is a cultural program with many different forms such as seafood and scamshot cuisine like banquets.

✓ Currently I have been living in Taiwan, which is located in the north of Vietnam and is a cultural place with many different forms such as seafood and scamshot cuisine like banquets.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is a cultural program' which is semantically wrong; it should be 'is a cultural place'. Also, the relative clause needs 'which is' to connect properly. The verb tense 'have been living' is correct for current ongoing action.

× To be honest, I'm in love with my hometown because it's a casual province therefore it have a lot of pictures, scenery like Green Party fights which will adorn and especially is the scorched cuisine.

✓ To be honest, I'm in love with my hometown because it's a casual province; therefore, it has a lot of pictures and scenery like Green Party festivals which adorn it, and especially the scorched cuisine.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'Green Party fights' is likely a mistranslation and should be 'Green Party festivals'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I have been living here for nearly 18 years and it was one more with me for with me when I was born and I grew up in here and is memorized for.

✓ I have been living here for nearly 18 years; it has been with me since I was born, and I grew up here, so it is memorable to me.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect phrases like 'it was one more with me for with me'. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses correct tense and prepositions.

× I guess no, because my hometown is a small village in the north of Vietnam. They form What if young people want to live in a peaceful place is a suddenly played but I adore the Herschel and bushel of the big city.

✓ I guess not, because my hometown is a small village in the north of Vietnam. If young people want to live in a peaceful place, it is suitable, but I adore the hustle and bustle of the big city.

The sentence contains many errors: 'They form What if' is incorrect and replaced with 'If'. 'Suddenly played' is incorrect and replaced with 'suitable'. 'Herschel and bushel' is a mishearing of 'hustle and bustle'. The verb agreement and sentence structure are corrected.