Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has some good points but contains unclear or incorrect words like 'lender', 'speak and span', and 'An moron' which confuse the listener. Try to use clear and correct vocabulary and avoid unnecessary or unrelated words. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: I come from London, which is a large and vibrant city. It is a clean and well-maintained place. Moreover, there are many facilities for residents, such as educational institutions, hospitals, and sports clubs.

제안: Your answer shows positive feelings about your hometown, but there are grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'becaused' and 'See Kid in the Candy store'. Try to use correct grammar and avoid unrelated expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I really love my hometown because it is a very beautiful and pleasant place. In addition, my city has numerous parks where I feel comfortable and relaxed. Whenever I feel bored at home, I usually go to the park to enjoy nature.

제안: Your answer partially addresses the question but contains grammar errors and unclear phrases like 'becauses' and 'Maketh Anakin'. Avoid unrelated or confusing expressions and focus on clear, direct answers with supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I have lived here since I was a child. I love my city because it is a beautiful and peaceful place to live. Moreover, I have many fond memories here, so I consider this city my home.

제안: Your answer includes relevant points but has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases such as 'becauses', 'Are universities', and 'men in training opportunities'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, organize your ideas logically using linking words.

예시: My hometown is a great place for young people because there are many facilities available, such as schools, colleges, and universities. Moreover, there are training opportunities for students. Apart from education, there are numerous shopping malls and sports clubs for young people to enjoy.

× It is a speak and span town.

✓ It is a spick and span town.

The phrase 'speak and span' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'spick and span,' which means very clean and tidy.

× An moron.

✓ [Sentence unclear and incomplete; please clarify the intended meaning.]

The phrase 'An moron.' is a sentence fragment and does not make sense in context. It lacks a verb and clear meaning.

× I really love my hometown becaused it is very beautiful and pleasant place.

✓ I really love my hometown because it is a very beautiful and pleasant place.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because'. Also, 'pleasant place' needs an article 'a' before it.

× my city has numerous parks in where I feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ my city has numerous parks where I feel comfortable and relaxed.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'where' and should be removed for correct grammar.

× When I feel bored in my home that time I went to park and.

✓ When I feel bored at home, I go to the park.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Feel' is present tense, so 'went' should be 'go' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'at home' is the correct preposition, and 'the park' needs the definite article.

× See Kid in the Candy store.

✓ [Sentence unclear and incomplete; please clarify the intended meaning.]

This phrase is incomplete and unclear as a sentence. It lacks a subject and verb to form a complete thought.

× And I love my city becauses it is very beautiful and peaceful place to live.

✓ And I love my city because it is a very beautiful and peaceful place to live.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because'. Also, 'peaceful place' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Moreover, I have lot of memories with Maketh Anakin in my city.

✓ Moreover, I have a lot of memories with Maketh Anakin in my city.

The phrase 'have lot of' is incorrect; it should be 'have a lot of' to be grammatically correct.

× After that I feel to this city like my own home.

✓ After that, I feel this city is like my own home.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the verb usage.

× My hometown is great place for youngsters becauses there are many facilities provided to students like educational institutions, colleges.

✓ My hometown is a great place for youngsters because there are many facilities provided to students like educational institutions and colleges.

The phrase 'great place' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'becauses' should be 'because'. The list should be connected properly with 'and'.

× Are universities and schools are more over men in training opportunities are also available to students.

✓ Universities and schools are available; moreover, training opportunities are also available to students.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. The correction separates ideas into clear clauses and corrects 'more over' to 'moreover'.