Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and complete sentences. Also, avoid informal words like 'bud' in formal tests. For example, say: 'My hometown is Tehran, but I currently live in Shiraz because of my father's job. We moved here recently.'

예시: My hometown is Tehran, but I currently live in Shiraz because of my father's job. We moved here recently.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas with linking words and use specific vocabulary. For example, say: 'I like Tehran because it has a rich history and beautiful streets. Also, it is conveniently located close to many important places.'

예시: I like Tehran because it has a rich history and beautiful streets. Also, it is conveniently located close to many important places.

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but fragmented. Use complete sentences and connect ideas smoothly. For example, say: 'I lived in Tehran for about two years. After that, we moved to Jam, and then finally to Shiraz. It's a long story.'

예시: I lived in Tehran for about two years. After that, we moved to Jam, and then finally to Shiraz. It's a long story.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and vague expressions. Use correct grammar and be more specific. For example, say: 'Yes, I think Tehran is a good place for young people because it has many facilities and activities suitable for children and youth.'

예시: Yes, I think Tehran is a good place for young people because it has many facilities and activities suitable for children and youth.

× I leave in Shiraz now because of my father job.

✓ I live in Shiraz now because of my father's job.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'live' to indicate residence. Also, 'father job' lacks possessive form; it should be 'father's job'. This is a third person singular issue because 'father' is singular and requires possessive form.

× He work here so we. Moved. 2.

✓ He works here so we moved.

The verb 'work' should be 'works' to agree with the third person singular subject 'He'. Also, 'Moved. 2.' is unclear and should be corrected to 'moved' to complete the sentence properly.

× I like my hometown and Tehran because of the. Anne. Reach his story. And also beautiful the streets. And. The axis. To everything.

✓ I like my hometown Tehran because of its rich history and also the beautiful streets and access to everything.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'Anne' and 'Reach his story'. The corrected sentence combines ideas into a coherent structure, correcting sentence fragments and unclear expressions.

× Just for two years, I think. After that we moved to. Jam. And then we moved to Shiraz. It's a long story.

✓ I have lived there for just two years, I think. After that, we moved to Jam, and then we moved to Shiraz. It's a long story.

The question asks 'How long have you lived there?', which requires present perfect tense. 'Just for two years' should be expressed as 'I have lived there for just two years' to correctly answer the question.

× I think yes, because my hometown Tehran, have a really good. Equipment for, you know. Child and young people.

✓ I think yes, because my hometown Tehran has really good equipment for, you know, children and young people.

The subject 'my hometown Tehran' is singular and requires the verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'child' should be plural 'children' to match the context.