Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say directly that you have graduated and now work as a private tutor, without repeating similar ideas.

예시: I have recently graduated and now work as a private tutor, helping high school students with math and science.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains hesitations and repetitions. Try to speak more fluently and structure your sentence properly. Also, use the present tense consistently when describing your current work.

예시: I work as a private tutor and usually visit different students' homes to teach high school subjects.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repetition. Also, explain briefly what challenges you face to make your answer more specific.

예시: Most of the time, the places I work are supportive and collaborative, but sometimes the environment is not suitable for teaching, and some students' behavior can be challenging.

제안: Your answer is good but contains some hesitations and repeated words. Try to speak more smoothly and use linking words to connect your ideas better.

예시: Honestly, I enjoy working in different homes because I get to experience various cultures and meet different guardians, which makes my job interesting.

제안: Your answer has repetitions and some grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to show the sequence of your plans.

예시: I have completed my BSc in Computer Science Engineering and I am passionate about web development. Currently, I am working on improving my skills so that I can become a software developer in the future.

× I I used, I'm going, I'm used to going many homes for tutoring the high school students.

✓ I am used to going to many homes for tutoring high school students.

The original sentence contains repetition and incorrect verb forms. 'I I used, I'm going' is incorrect and confusing. The correct expression is 'I am used to going' which means the speaker is accustomed to visiting many homes. Also, 'many homes' should be preceded by 'to' as in 'going to many homes'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× sometimes I face many challenges that the place are not suitable for teaching and the behavior of the.

✓ sometimes I face many challenges because the places are not suitable for teaching and the behavior of the people is problematic.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement issue: 'the place are' should be 'the places are' because 'places' is plural. Also, the sentence is incomplete ('the behavior of the.'), so it is completed to make sense. Correct plural forms and complete thoughts are necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the places where you work?

The question is about multiple places since the student travels to different houses. Using 'the place' (singular) is incorrect here. Changing to 'the places' (plural) matches the context and improves accuracy.

× So I work on it right now so that I can be so that I can be a software developer in future.

✓ So I am working on it right now so that I can be a software developer in the future.

The phrase 'I work on it right now' should be in present continuous tense 'I am working on it right now' to indicate an ongoing action. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct.