Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, чтобы ясно выразить мысль. Также избегайте повторений и старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос.

예시: I am a student currently studying at the National University of Uzbekistan. Besides studying, I try to stay healthy by exercising regularly.

제안: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит непонятные фразы. Следует отвечать прямо и ясно, избегая лишних и неуместных деталей. Используйте связные предложения и объясняйте свои мысли конкретно.

예시: I don't have a job currently. However, during holidays, I spend time in the fields to relax and help my family with some tasks.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать связные предложения с подходящими связками, чтобы сделать ответ более логичным и понятным.

예시: I think it is a good place to work because it is spacious and peaceful. Also, I can relax there and meet new friends.

제안: Ответ содержит много пауз и грамматических ошибок. Рекомендуется практиковать плавное и связное выражение мыслей, а также использовать правильные времена и структуру предложений.

예시: Actually, I don't want to work there because it is just my hobby. After I graduate from university, I plan to work as a teacher in a school because I enjoy teaching.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить больше деталей и использовать разнообразные слова для улучшения выразительности. Также можно использовать связки для плавности речи.

예시: After I graduate from university, I plan to become a teacher and work in a school. I enjoy teaching because it allows me to help students learn and grow. I believe this career will be both fulfilling and meaningful for me.

× If I be honest, I know that IA student and I'm studying, I'm studying at National University of Uzbekistan.

✓ If I am honest, I know that I am a student and I'm studying at National University of Uzbekistan.

The modal verb 'be' is incorrectly used as 'be' instead of 'am' in the first conditional phrase. The correct form is 'If I am honest'. Also, 'IA' seems to be a typo and should be 'I am'. Use 'am' for first person singular present tense.

× But in all this, actually I try to work for my health.

✓ But in all this, actually I try to work for my health.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× No, I don't work, but in holidays I go to the field because in the field I relax and in whole days I try to work for my family for buying another things such as counselor, counselor.

✓ No, I don't work, but during holidays I go to the field because in the field I relax and on whole days I try to work for my family to buy other things such as a counselor.

The phrase 'in holidays' should be 'during holidays' to correctly express time. 'In whole days' should be 'on whole days' or better 'all day'. 'For buying' should be 'to buy' to express purpose. 'Another things' should be 'other things' and 'counselor' repeated is unclear, possibly a mistake.

× As I see it, it's good for good place to work because in this place I usually relax and I have a good time there because there is a big field and you can make a make friends and make.

✓ As I see it, it's a good place to work because in this place I usually relax and have a good time there because there is a big field and you can make friends.

The phrase 'good for good place' is incorrect; it should be 'a good place'. The phrase 'make a make friends and make' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'make friends'.

× Actually, no, because I, it's uh, it's just my hobby. And when I, uh, graduation my, when I will graduation my university, I go to the school for teaching because I like teaching and studying in the school.

✓ Actually, no, because it's just my hobby. And when I graduate from university, I will go to a school to teach because I like teaching and studying in school.

'When I will graduation my university' is incorrect; the correct form is 'when I graduate from university'. 'I go to the school for teaching' should be 'I will go to a school to teach'. Modal verb 'will' is used for future plans. 'Studying in the school' is better as 'studying in school'.

× After I graduate from university, I plan to become a teacher and work in a school because I enjoy teaching and learning with students.

✓ After I graduate from university, I plan to become a teacher and work in a school because I enjoy teaching and learning with students.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× I believe working in a school will be more fulfilling and meaningful for me.

✓ I believe working in a school will be more fulfilling and meaningful for me.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.