Work— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
Currently I am working as in Software engineer at a company called Bliss which is located at. I love my work because it challenges me and it helped me to learn new technologies and the environment is very friendly so I love my work.
시험관
Where do you work?>
수험생
I'm working at a company called IS Bliss which is situated at Ubuntu Kathmandu. The environment is very friendly near my work.
시험관
Is it a good place to work?
수험생
Yes, the environment is very friendly. The people, the colleagues are very friendly and amiable. Also, I love my boss because he always inspires me. He's kind of a friend to me rather than just calling him, rather than just having a professional. Relationship I have very.
시험관
Would you like the place where you work?
수험생
Yes, I absolutely love the place where I work because of my colleagues, mostly because they always help me to learn new things in the workplace. Uh, just yesterday they taught me how to make pizza in the oven and that was quite interesting. So we kind of do these things regularly, so it is kind of family to me.
시험관
What are your future work plans?
수험생
I think I'll continue to work as, uh, an AI engineer, uh, in the future. So mostly I'll be working and developing this AI model because I really love my work and I cannot see any other profession that would interest me, uh, other than this machine learning. I also love the people that are in the team of the.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is generally good but it has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, complete your sentences fully to sound natural.
예시: I am currently working as a Software Engineer at a company called Bliss. I enjoy my job because it challenges me and helps me learn new technologies. Moreover, the work environment is very friendly, which makes my experience enjoyable.
Where do you work?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is short and lacks clarity. Avoid unnecessary words and be more specific. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
예시: I work at a company called IS Bliss, which is located in Ubuntu, Kathmandu. The environment around my workplace is very friendly and welcoming.
Is it a good place to work?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer has good content but the sentences are fragmented and unclear. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid repetition. Use linking words to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, it is a great place to work because the environment is very friendly. My colleagues are amiable, and I really appreciate my boss, who inspires me and treats me more like a friend than just a professional superior.
Would you like the place where you work?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is natural and detailed but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and making sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, I absolutely love my workplace because my colleagues always help me learn new things. For example, just yesterday they taught me how to make pizza in the oven. We often do such activities, so it feels like a family to me.
What are your future work plans?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer shows your passion but contains many filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.
예시: In the future, I plan to continue working as an AI engineer, focusing on developing AI models. I love this field and cannot imagine pursuing any other profession. Additionally, I enjoy working with my team members, who are very supportive.
문법
× Currently I am working as in Software engineer at a company called Bliss which is located at.
✓ Currently I am working as a Software Engineer at a company called Bliss.
The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used after 'working as'. The correct phrase is 'working as a Software Engineer'. Also, 'located at' is incomplete and unnecessary here.
× Currently I am working as in Software engineer at a company called Bliss which is located at.
✓ Currently I am working as a Software Engineer at a company called Bliss.
The sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. Removing 'in' and the incomplete phrase 'which is located at' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.
× I'm working at a company called IS Bliss which is situated at Ubuntu Kathmandu.
✓ I'm working at a company called IS Bliss which is situated in Ubuntu, Kathmandu.
The preposition 'at' is incorrect for locations like cities or areas; 'in' should be used instead. Also, a comma is needed between 'Ubuntu' and 'Kathmandu'.
× The environment is very friendly near my work.
✓ The environment near my work is very friendly.
The original sentence misplaces 'near my work' making it unclear. Placing 'near my work' before 'is very friendly' clarifies the meaning.
× He's kind of a friend to me rather than just calling him, rather than just having a professional. Relationship I have very.
✓ He's kind of a friend to me rather than just having a professional relationship.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammar.
× I think I'll continue to work as, uh, an AI engineer, uh, in the future.
✓ I think I'll continue to work as an AI engineer in the future.
The commas and filler words 'uh' are unnecessary and disrupt the sentence flow. Removing them makes the sentence clearer.
× I also love the people that are in the team of the.
✓ I also love the people who are in the team.
The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Completing the sentence with 'who are in the team' makes it grammatically correct.
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