Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误，应该使用现在完成时态，例如“I have been working for five years”。另外，回答应更自然流畅，避免重复“drug development”。

예시: I have been working for five years in the drug development department.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，且信息表达不完整。应明确公司类型和工作内容，避免重复词汇。

예시: I work at a small tech company that specializes in drug development in Edinburgh.

제안: 回答不完整，句子未结束，且重复使用“very”。建议用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体理由。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to work because all the employees are very friendly and supportive.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“the this place”，应简洁表达。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I like my workplace because it is beautiful and conveniently located near my home.

제안: 回答中有重复词和语法错误，应使用正确的时态和结构，如“to improve my English skills”。建议表达更自然流畅。

예시: My plan is to improve my English skills so that I can communicate better with foreign colleagues, which is important for my career.

× I have been work for five years.

✓ I have been working for five years.

这里使用现在完成进行时态，动词work应使用动名词形式working，表示动作从过去持续到现在。

× I focus on the drug development, drug development department.

✓ I focus on the drug development department.

drug development department是单数名词短语，前面不需要重复drug development，且department前应有定冠词the。

× An artwork and a small tech company.

✓ I work at an artwork and a small tech company.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整，应补充完整句子结构。

× Our our company focus on the Edinburgh drug development.

✓ Our company focuses on Edinburgh drug development.

company是第三人称单数，谓语动词focus应加-s变为focuses，且去掉重复的our。

× Yeah, yeah. I think this is a very, very good place. All employees are very friendly and.

✓ Yeah, yeah. I think this is a very, very good place. All employees are very friendly.

句子末尾and后缺少内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉and或补充完整。

× Yes, I like the this place at my work.

✓ Yes, I like this place at my work.

the和this不能同时使用，二者都是限定词，需选择其一。

× My place is very beautiful and the place is very convenient to my home.

✓ My workplace is very beautiful and the place is very convenient for my home.

convenient后应接介词for表示对某人方便，而不是to。

× My, my, my plan is is improved my English skills, that we can communicate with foreign colleagues.

✓ My plan is to improve my English skills so that I can communicate with foreign colleagues.

plan后应接不定式to improve，且句子结构需调整，that改为so that引导目的状语从句。