Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지만 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 좀 더 자연스럽고 정확한 문장 구조를 사용하고, 이유를 설명할 때 연결어를 활용해 보세요.

예시: I'm currently a university student majoring in Emergency Medicine. I chose this field because I want to learn more about medical knowledge and the human body's structure.

제안: 문법 오류가 많고 문장이 부자연스럽습니다. 정확한 시제 사용과 명확한 장소 설명을 위해 문장을 간결하게 구성하세요.

예시: I am currently studying at Dutchman University, which has two campuses: one in Seoul and another in Incheon. I attend the medical campus located in Incheon.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 이유를 명확히 하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because many students major in medical fields, so we often have opportunities to practice and learn together.

제안: 문장이 길고 어색하며, 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 간결하고 명확하게 이유를 설명하고, 연결어를 적절히 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I like the place because it is quiet and conducive to studying. Additionally, there are many activities that help improve our medical skills.

제안: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 미래 계획을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하도록 연습하세요.

예시: I plan to continue studying my major in depth and hope to study abroad in the UK to gain more medical knowledge.

× My major is emergency department.

✓ My major is the emergency department.

The phrase 'emergency department' is a specific noun phrase that requires the definite article 'the' to specify the particular department. Without 'the', the sentence sounds incomplete or incorrect.

× The reason I choose studies I want to know about medical knowledge and physical structures so I choose them.

✓ The reason I chose this field of study is that I want to learn about medical knowledge and physical structures, so I chose it.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms, making it confusing. 'Choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to match the context. Also, 'studies' is vague; 'field of study' is clearer. The sentence needs proper connectors like 'is that' and commas for clarity.

× I'm currently study in Dutchman University.

✓ I'm currently studying at Dutchman University.

The verb 'study' should be in the present participle form 'studying' after 'I'm currently'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to attending a university.

× The guttion university has two buildings, 1 is in Seoul and other thing is Incheon.

✓ Guttion University has two buildings: one is in Seoul and the other is in Incheon.

Proper nouns like 'Guttion University' should be capitalized. Numbers should be written as words in formal speech. 'Other thing' is incorrect; 'the other' is appropriate. Also, a colon is better to introduce the list.

× I currently study in medical campus, this is in Incheon.

✓ I currently study at the medical campus, which is in Incheon.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a campus. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split or connected properly with 'which'.

× Yes, because we specially studying medical related so we have many medical related major students so we often practice our medical studying.

✓ Yes, because we are specially studying medical-related subjects, we have many students majoring in medical fields, so we often practice our medical studies.

'Specially' should be 'especially' to mean 'particularly'. The verb 'studying' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form present continuous. 'Medical related' should be hyphenated as 'medical-related'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Yes, because the studying place is very quiet and good at studying so and we have many diverse activities to improve our medical skills, so I like.

✓ Yes, because the study place is very quiet and good for studying, and we have many diverse activities to improve our medical skills, so I like it.

'Studying place' is better as 'study place'. 'Good at studying' should be 'good for studying'. The sentence has unnecessary conjunctions and lacks the object 'it' after 'I like'.

× I want to study more my major and I want to deeper study so I have a plan to abroad in the UK and I more learn about medical.

✓ I want to study my major more deeply, and I plan to go abroad to the UK to learn more about medicine.

The phrase 'study more my major' is incorrect; it should be 'study my major more deeply'. 'Deeper study' should be 'study more deeply'. 'I have a plan to abroad' is incorrect; it should be 'I plan to go abroad'. 'I more learn about medical' is ungrammatical; 'learn more about medicine' is correct.