Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并简化表达，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: I am currently a postgraduate student majoring in journalism. I have two years left before graduation, so I haven't started working yet because I want to focus on my studies and gain more knowledge before starting my career.

제안: 回答直接但表达不够自然，且句子结构稍显复杂。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词和介词的使用。

예시: I am currently a student and don't have a job. However, if I get the chance, I would like to work as a journalist for a daily newspaper in Shanghai.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意冠词和词汇搭配的正确使用。

예시: If I have the chance to work at the daily newspaper, I think it would be a good place because it has a high reputation for excellent and professional news reports. Moreover, its location is convenient, allowing easy access to many places.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，表达不清晰。建议注意词汇的准确使用，句子结构应更简洁明了，并使用连接词提高连贯性。

예시: Yes, I would like the place. The people are friendly and supportive. Sometimes, they teach me how to report a story. Also, the office is very convenient for my daily commute.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和单复数形式，使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

예시: I am currently a postgraduate student and have two years before graduation. After that, I plan to become a professional journalist, conduct interviews, research social issues, and uncover the truth. This is my future career plan.

× I still have two year before graduation so I haven't work yet because I want to focus on my study and get more knowledge before studying my career.

✓ I still have two years before graduation so I haven't worked yet because I want to focus on my study and get more knowledge before starting my career.

“two year”中“year”应为复数形式“years”，因为数字two后面名词应使用复数形式。

× I still have two year before graduation so I haven't work yet because I want to focus on my study and get more knowledge before studying my career.

✓ I still have two years before graduation so I haven't worked yet because I want to focus on my study and get more knowledge before starting my career.

“haven't work”中“work”应为过去分词“worked”，因为现在完成时态需要用过去分词形式。

× I still have two year before graduation so I haven't work yet because I want to focus on my study and get more knowledge before studying my career.

✓ I still have two years before graduation so I haven't worked yet because I want to focus on my study and get more knowledge before starting my career.

“before studying my career”表达不准确，应改为“before starting my career”，因为“start”后接动名词表示开始做某事更合适。

× If I have a chance get into the daily report, I think it is a good place to work because it has high reputation for its excellent and professional news reports and the location is good also.

✓ If I have a chance to get into the daily report, I think it is a good place to work because it has a high reputation for its excellent and professional news reports and the location is good also.

“have a chance get”中缺少介词“to”，应为“have a chance to get”。

× If I have a chance get into the daily report, I think it is a good place to work because it has high reputation for its excellent and professional news reports and the location is good also.

✓ If I have a chance to get into the daily report, I think it is a good place to work because it has a high reputation for its excellent and professional news reports and the location is good also.

“has high reputation”中“reputation”前应加不定冠词“a”，因为“reputation”是可数名词。

× Also you can get everywhere you want to go.

✓ Also you can get to everywhere you want to go.

“get everywhere”缺少介词“to”，应为“get to everywhere”，表示到达某地。

× The people here are friendly and supported, sometimes they teach me how to inform a story and also the office play is a very convenient for commute every day.

✓ The people here are friendly and supportive, sometimes they teach me how to inform a story and also the office place is very convenient for commuting every day.

“supported”应为形容词“supportive”，表示支持的；“office play”应为“office place”；“convenient for commute”应改为“convenient for commuting”，动名词形式更合适。

× The people here are friendly and supported, sometimes they teach me how to inform a story and also the office play is a very convenient for commute every day.

✓ The people here are friendly and supportive, sometimes they teach me how to inform a story and also the office place is very convenient for commuting every day.

“convenient for commute”中“commute”应为动名词“commuting”，表示通勤这个动作。

× I am currently a post graduate student, so there have two years before my graduation.

✓ I am currently a postgraduate student, so there are two years before my graduation.

“there have two years”中“have”应为“are”，因为“there are”用于表示存在多个事物。

× I am currently a post graduate student, so there have two years before my graduation.

✓ I am currently a postgraduate student, so there are two years before my graduation.

“post graduate”应写作一个词“postgraduate”，这是固定搭配。

× At that time I think I will become a professional journalist, get some interview and do the research on society and recovering the truth.

✓ At that time I think I will become a professional journalist, conduct some interviews and do research on society and uncover the truth.

“get some interview”表达不准确，应为“conduct some interviews”；“do the research”中“the”可省略；“recovering the truth”应改为“uncover the truth”，更符合表达习惯。