Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary details like the exact location unless asked. Also, use correct tense and article usage for fluency.

예시: I am currently working as a truck driver for a transport company.

제안: Good direct answer, but avoid repeating the job title. Also, 'on a Steel Ave.' is incorrect; use 'on Steel Ave.' or 'at Steel Ave.'. Try to combine sentences for better flow.

예시: I work as a truck driver for Hunter Expressive, which is located on Steel Ave in Brampton.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use present perfect tense to indicate duration and complete your thoughts clearly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy working here. I have been working at this company for the past three years, so it is a great place for me.

제안: This answer is unclear and contains errors. Focus on expressing your opinion clearly, use correct vocabulary ('staff' instead of 'stuff'), and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I like the place where I work because it has a friendly environment and the staff are very supportive.

제안: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb forms for clarity.

예시: My future plan is to return to my hometown with my family when my work permit expires. However, I am also trying to get permanent residency because I love this place and want to live here long-term.

× Currently I'm working as a truck driver in a transport company which is located at Steel Ave.

✓ Currently I work as a truck driver in a transport company which is located at Steel Ave.

The present simple tense is preferred here to describe a regular or current job rather than the present continuous tense, which is used for temporary actions or actions happening right now.

× I work as a truck driver for Hunter Expressive. This company is located on a Steel Ave. in Brampton.

✓ I work as a truck driver for Hunter Expressive. This company is located on Steel Ave. in Brampton.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'Steel Ave.' because street names do not require an indefinite article when preceded by 'on'.

× Yes, I really enjoy this place to work.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy working at this place.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Also, 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location here.

× I'm working from here last since three years, so it is very good for.

✓ I have been working here for the last three years, so it is very good for me.

The present perfect continuous tense ('have been working') is appropriate to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'for' is used with a duration, and 'since' with a point in time. The sentence was incomplete and needed 'for me' to complete the thought.

× I would like to play so therefore it is very friendly environment and stuff is very good, so I really enjoy to.

✓ I would like to say that it is a very friendly environment and the staff is very good, so I really enjoy it.

The modal verb 'would like' is correctly used to express preference, but 'play' is incorrect here; 'say' fits the context. 'Stuff' should be 'staff' when referring to employees. Also, 'enjoy' should be followed by an object, not 'to'.

× My future plan is quite clear when my work permit is expired then I'm go to back to the my hometown with my family.

✓ My future plan is quite clear: when my work permit expires, I will go back to my hometown with my family.

The correct future tense 'will go' is needed instead of 'I'm go'. Also, 'expires' is present simple for scheduled events. 'To back' is incorrect; 'go back' is the correct phrase. 'The my hometown' is incorrect; 'my hometown' suffices.

× So also I'm trying to get the PR for permanent for permanent resident because of I love this place so I'm trying to live here for a long time.

✓ I am also trying to get permanent residency because I love this place and want to live here for a long time.

'PR' should be expanded to 'permanent residency' for clarity. 'Because of I love' is incorrect; 'because I love' is correct. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.