Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有语法错误，时态使用不当，且表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态，并简洁明了地说明你的身份。

예시: I graduated from college three years ago, and since then, I have been working at an electrical company.

제안: 回答较好，但可以更自然地表达地理位置，并增加一些细节使回答更丰富。

예시: I work in Shenzhen, a major city in southern China near the coast, known for its rapid development and vibrant economy.

제안: 回答不够连贯，有语法错误，且内容不够聚焦。建议先明确回答是否是一个好地方工作，然后用连词连接具体原因，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, Shenzhen is a good place to work because it is a modern city with many opportunities, although the summers are long and humid due to its coastal location.

제안: 回答缺少主语，语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议完整表达观点，并用连词连接原因，注意时态和语法。

예시: I don't like the place where I work because the summer lasts about eight months with high temperatures, and it is often rainy and humid.

제안: 回答表达了计划，但语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意名词单复数和词序。

예시: Recently, I decided to quit my job and plan to pursue further education to gain specialized and comprehensive skills.

× I have been working in an electrical company until then.

✓ I worked in an electrical company until then.

The sentence refers to a completed action in the past ('until then'), so the past perfect continuous tense 'have been working' is incorrect. The simple past tense 'worked' is appropriate here to indicate a finished action.

× My company is situated in Shenzhen, a major city in southern China located nearby the coast.

✓ My company is situated in Shenzhen, a major city in southern China located near the coast.

The preposition 'nearby' is an adverb meaning 'close by' and should not be used before a noun. The correct preposition before 'the coast' is 'near' to indicate proximity.

× Shenzhen is a modern city filled with skyscrapers and because and it's nearby the coast, the they are humid and long summer.

✓ Shenzhen is a modern city filled with skyscrapers, and because it is near the coast, the summers are humid and long.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions ('and because and'), incorrect preposition ('nearby'), and unclear subject reference ('the they'). The corrected sentence removes redundancy, uses the correct preposition 'near', and clarifies the subject 'summers' to improve clarity and grammar.

× I don't like because we have a long summer, lasted about 8 months with high temperature. It's raining and humid.

✓ I don't like it because we have a long summer that lasts about 8 months with high temperatures. It is rainy and humid.

The sentence lacks an object after 'I don't like', and the clause 'lasted about 8 months' should be in present tense 'lasts' to describe a habitual condition. Also, 'high temperature' should be plural 'high temperatures' to match the context. 'It's raining' is changed to 'It is rainy' to describe the general climate.

× Recently I made a decision to quit my job and I'm now planning to pursue the further education to gain a specialized, knowledgeable and comprehensive skills.

✓ Recently I made a decision to quit my job and I'm now planning to pursue further education to gain specialized, knowledgeable, and comprehensive skills.

The article 'the' before 'further education' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'skills' is plural, so adjectives describing it should not have 'a' before them. The corrected sentence removes 'the' and 'a' to properly modify the plural noun 'skills'.