Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如"a few months ago"，并且可以直接说明当前状态，避免含糊。

예시: I am currently not working or studying. I recently graduated a few months ago.

제안: 回答中应注意语法正确，如"an internship"应为"an intern"或"an internship position"，并且句子结构应更自然。

예시: I am not working at the moment, but a few months ago I worked as an intern at Walt Disney.

제안: 回答可以更具体，使用更丰富的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think it is a great place to work because my team members are very friendly, and my manager taught me valuable skills like project and program management.

제안: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免冗长和不自然表达，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: Yes, I really like it because I could take breaks in the park and see Disney characters like Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck.

제안: 回答较好，但可以更自然地表达未来计划，并使用连接词。

예시: To be honest, I don't plan to work for now because I will go to Australia to pursue further studies.

× I was a student just few months ago.

✓ I was a student just a few months ago.

这里缺少冠词“a”，正确表达应该是“a few months ago”，表示几个月前。

× Now I don't work, but several months ago I worked as a internship in Walt Disney.

✓ Now I don't work, but several months ago I worked as an intern at Walt Disney.

“internship”是名词，表示实习期，不能用作职位。应使用“intern”表示实习生职位。同时，“an”用于以元音音素开头的单词前，且介词应为“at”表示在某公司工作。

× Now I don't work, but several months ago I worked as a internship in Walt Disney.

✓ Now I don't work, but several months ago I worked as an intern at Walt Disney.

介词“in”用于表示在某个空间内，而工作地点通常用“at”表示。

× My manager taught me something useful such as project management or program management.

✓ My manager taught me something useful, such as project management or program management.

在“something useful”和“such as”之间应加逗号，表示举例。

× I like it so much until now because I could go to the park for a rest when I got hired in working and I could see lots of Disney friends such as Mickey Mouse, Donald Duck.

✓ I like it so much until now because I could go to the park to rest when I was working and I could see lots of Disney friends such as Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck.

“go to the park for a rest”应改为“go to the park to rest”，表示目的。短语“got hired in working”不正确，应改为“was working”表示在工作期间。列举时“such as”后面多个项用“and”连接。

× To be honest, I don't plan to work anymore and I will go to Australia for further study.

✓ To be honest, I don't plan to work anymore and I am going to go to Australia for further study.

表达未来计划时，使用“be going to”更自然，表示已经决定的未来行动。