Work— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
Currently I'm a 12th grader. I specialize in social science because I had a little hat for learning some social science subjects such as literally literature or history.
시험관
Where do you work?>
수험생
I have been learning at the in high school, high school I was, I am really enthusiastic about this, about learning, studying in here and I enjoy learning many things.
시험관
Is it a good place to work?
수험생
I think that my school is a great place to study because the first reason is teachers are enthusiastic and knowledgeable and also kind hearted at the same time and the second reason is the compass of my school are very spacious to for students to go to.
시험관
Would you like the place where you work?
수험생
So I'm a student so it's a school. I think my school is quite spacious and comfortable for everyone, for every student to study there and gain useful skills and also achieve many achievements effectively.
시험관
What are your future work plans?
수험생
I deem that there are many charges for me to to depict depict but I think that I will be an interpreter because I'm enjoying languages such as English and so I had a passion of translating language into language.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và chính xác về việc bạn là học sinh lớp 12 và chuyên ngành xã hội học. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ sai như "literally literature" và "a little hat" (có thể bạn muốn nói "a little interest").
예시: I am currently a 12th-grade student specializing in social sciences because I have a strong interest in subjects like literature and history.
Where do you work?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn.
예시: I am currently studying at a high school, and I really enjoy learning many new things here.
Is it a good place to work?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "compass" thành "campus". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp.
예시: I think my school is a great place to study because the teachers are enthusiastic, knowledgeable, and kind. Moreover, the campus is very spacious, which makes it comfortable for students.
Would you like the place where you work?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Bạn có thể dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Since I am a student, my workplace is my school. I like it because it is spacious and comfortable, allowing students to study effectively and develop useful skills.
What are your future work plans?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ đơn giản và chính xác để diễn đạt ý định nghề nghiệp trong tương lai.
예시: I plan to become an interpreter because I enjoy learning languages like English and have a passion for translating between languages.
문법
× I specialize in social science because I had a little hat for learning some social science subjects such as literally literature or history.
✓ I specialize in social science because I have a little habit of learning some social science subjects such as literature or history.
The word 'hat' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'habit'. Also, 'literally literature' is incorrect; it should be just 'literature'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs leading to confusion.
× I have been learning at the in high school, high school I was, I am really enthusiastic about this, about learning, studying in here and I enjoy learning many things.
✓ I have been studying at high school. I am really enthusiastic about learning here and I enjoy learning many things.
The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant phrases. The phrase 'at the in high school, high school I was' is incorrect and unclear. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× the compass of my school are very spacious to for students to go to.
✓ The campus of my school is very spacious for students to go to.
The word 'compass' is incorrect; the correct word is 'campus'. Also, 'are' should be 'is' because 'campus' is singular. The phrase 'to for students to go to' is redundant; 'for students to go to' suffices. This is an incorrect use of the definite article and subject-verb agreement.
× the compass of my school are very spacious to for students to go to.
✓ The campus of my school is very spacious for students to go to.
The subject 'campus' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.
× I deem that there are many charges for me to to depict depict but I think that I will be an interpreter because I'm enjoying languages such as English and so I had a passion of translating language into language.
✓ I think that there are many choices for me to decide, but I think that I will be an interpreter because I enjoy languages such as English and I have a passion for translating languages.
The phrase 'charges for me to to depict depict' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'choices for me to decide'. 'I'm enjoying' should be 'I enjoy' to express a general preference. 'I had a passion of' should be 'I have a passion for'. These are incorrect uses of prepositions and verb forms.
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