Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點不自然，語法和用詞需要改進。建議你直接回答問題，並用完整且流暢的句子介紹自己和專業，避免不必要的停頓和錯誤。

예시: I am Roy, a student at National Taiwan Normal University. I major in Earth Science, where I study subjects such as geology, geophysics, oceanography, and astronomy.

제안: 回答不完整且語法錯誤，建議直接回答問題，使用完整句子說明你是學生，並說明學校和科系。

예시: I am currently a student at National Taiwan Normal University, where I study Earth Science.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達。建議用更自然的句子表達你的看法，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because my school offers a variety of courses that I can choose from.

제안: 回答不夠完整且語法錯誤。建議直接表達喜歡學校的原因，並用連接詞連接句子，使回答更完整。

예시: Yes, definitely. My school provides various courses, and I especially love one of them because it matches my interests.

제안: 回答有點斷裂，語法不流暢。建議用完整句子表達你目前的想法，並用連接詞使句子更自然。

예시: I am currently a sophomore, so I think it is too early to decide on my future work plans.

× I myself am Roy at. National Taiwan Normal University, Ann.

✓ I myself am Roy at National Taiwan Normal University, Ann.

The period after 'at' is incorrect and breaks the sentence structure. Removing the period corrects the prepositional phrase 'at National Taiwan Normal University'.

× I major in Earth science.

✓ I major in Earth Science.

The term 'Earth Science' is a proper noun for an academic discipline and should be capitalized.

× I study subjects like mythology, geology, geophysics, oceanography and astronomy.

✓ I study subjects such as mythology, geology, geophysics, oceanography, and astronomy.

The phrase 'such as' is more appropriate than 'like' when listing examples in formal contexts. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list (Oxford comma) for clarity.

× And currently does student. Add National Taiwan Normal University. Where I study earth science.

✓ I am currently a student at National Taiwan Normal University, where I study Earth Science.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper subject-verb agreement and sentence flow. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I think it is a group. Good place to study because my school provides a variety of courses that I can choose from.

✓ Yes, I think it is a good place to study because my school provides a variety of courses that I can choose from.

The phrase 'a group. Good place' is incorrect and fragmented. Removing 'group.' and combining into 'a good place' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, definitely. My school provided with various courses that I can choose. One of them that I love the most.

✓ Yes, definitely. My school provides various courses that I can choose from. One of them is my favorite.

'Provided with' is incorrect here; 'provides' is the correct verb. Also, 'One of them that I love the most' is incomplete; adding 'is my favorite' completes the sentence.

× Now I'm a sophomore, so I think to consider this question is. Too early to decide.

✓ Now I'm a sophomore, so I think it is too early to consider this question.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Reordering and removing unnecessary words creates a grammatically correct and natural sentence.