Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が断片的で文法的に不正確な部分が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。文をつなげて自然な英語で答える練習をしましょう。例えば、自己紹介と現在の状況を簡潔に述べることが重要です。

예시: I am currently a student. I attended an international school in Singapore until May and have graduated from grade 8. Now, I am studying at a grammar school to prepare for entering a Japanese university.

제안: 質問に対して直接的に答えられていません。文法や語順の誤りも多いです。質問の意図を理解し、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

예시: I am not working now because I am studying at a grammar school to prepare for entering a Japanese university. After graduating, I want to work at a company.

제안: 答えが短く、理由の説明が不十分です。接続詞を使って理由を明確に述べ、文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to work because the grammar school helps me prepare for the Japanese university entrance exam.

제안: 内容は良いですが、文法ミスや不自然な表現があります。文を整理し、正しい語彙を使う練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I like this place because it is a cram school that helps me prepare for the Japanese university entrance exams. The teachers are very supportive, and the quiet environment makes studying easier. This helps me feel confident about my future exams.

제안: 内容が不明瞭で、文法的にも大きな誤りがあります。将来の計画を明確にし、簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: My future work plan is to work in business. If I can, I want to support and help people through my work.

× I am a student, however. Aye. Attended International. School. In Singapore until May. And have already graduated 8 and I'm now studying. In grammar school for interning Japanese university.

✓ I am a student. I attended an international school in Singapore until May and have already graduated from grade 8. Now, I am studying at a grammar school to enter a Japanese university.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper sentence structure. Combining related ideas into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I am studying now grammar school. For entering. Japanese University.

✓ I am now studying at a grammar school to enter a Japanese university.

The preposition 'at' is required after 'studying' to indicate the place of study. Also, 'for entering' is better expressed as 'to enter' to indicate purpose.

× And if you are. Past Japanese university. I want to I will want to work. Employing school in the future.

✓ After I enter a Japanese university, I want to work at a company in the future.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. Clarifying the subject and verb agreement and using correct pronouns improves understanding.

× Grammar school. Is help to me about. Exam for Japanese university.

✓ The grammar school helps me prepare for the exam for the Japanese university.

The phrase 'help to me about' is incorrect. The verb 'help' is followed directly by the object, and 'prepare for' is the correct phrase for exams.

× The teachers are very supportive and the improvement is quiet. Which makes selling easier.

✓ The teachers are very supportive, and the improvement is quite noticeable, which makes studying easier.

'Quiet' is an adjective meaning silent; the correct adverb is 'quite'. 'Selling' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'studying'. Correct word choice is essential for meaning.

× My future work plans is. Uh, my future work plans that I want to go to. Point Businesses.

✓ My future work plans are to go into business.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'point businesses' is unclear; 'go into business' is a common expression.

× If I can go to prison for in businesses I support and help the. People.

✓ If I can go into business, I want to support and help people.

'Go to prison for in businesses' is incorrect and confusing. The intended meaning is likely 'go into business'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey meaning.