Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Daha sadə və aydın cümlələr qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın, sonra əlavə məlumat verin. İngilis dilində düzgün zaman formalarından istifadə edin və cümlələri qısa saxlayın.

예시: I am a student at Boca State University. I have a master's degree in Nanobiotechnology. I am very interested in this field. After completing my degree, I plan to continue my studies in a different program.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və səhvlər var. Universitetin adını düzgün deyin və işiniz haqqında aydın məlumat verin. Mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin.

예시: I work at Buckle State University, which is located in Azerbaijan near Abbey Street. I am a lab technician and I am involved in scientific research in my field.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və natamam ifadələr var. Cavabınızı daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün cümlələri birləşdirin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to work because the laboratory is modern and equipped with the latest technology. For example, we have an electron microscope, which is essential for my work. I really enjoy my job.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi səhvləri var. Daha aydın və təbii ifadələr istifadə edin. Mövzunu dəstəkləyən əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin.

예시: Yes, I like the place where I work because there is a big garden with many different types of plants. When I take a break, I enjoy walking in the garden and smelling the flowers. There are also butterflies, which makes the place peaceful.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və ifadə qarışıqlığı var. Gələcək planlarınızı aydın və ardıcıl şəkildə ifadə edin. Əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi dəstəkləyən detalları əlavə edin.

예시: I want to become a successful scientist in the field of Nanobiotechnology. I plan to work in a large company, one of which is located in Germany. Therefore, I am improving my German language skills and I intend to continue my PhD studies in Germany.

× No, I didn't work.

✓ No, I don't work.

The question is about the present situation, so the present tense should be used instead of the past tense 'didn't work'. Use 'don't work' to indicate current status.

× I am student at the Boca State University.

✓ I am a student at Boca State University.

The noun 'student' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'the' before 'Boca State University' is unnecessary unless the university's name includes 'the'.

× I am a Manchester and I have my master degree in Nanobiotechnology failed.

✓ I am from Manchester and I have my master's degree in Nanobiotechnology, but I failed.

'Manchester' is a place, so 'from Manchester' is correct. 'Master degree' should be 'master's degree' to show possession. The sentence structure was unclear; adding 'but I failed' clarifies the meaning.

× And I'm so interested in my master degree and after the gathering this master degree, I'm going to repeat the in the other version.

✓ I am very interested in my master's degree, and after completing it, I am going to repeat it in another version.

The sentence was unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Gathering this master degree' is incorrect; 'completing it' is appropriate. 'Repeat the in the other version' is corrected to 'repeat it in another version' for clarity.

× I've worked at my university.

✓ I work at my university.

The question is about current work, so present tense 'I work' is appropriate instead of present perfect 'I've worked' which implies past experience.

× My universe is Buckle State University which is in Azure version and is located in the Abbey near the street.

✓ My university is Buckle State University, which is in Azure version and is located in Abbey near the street.

'Universe' is incorrect; it should be 'university'. Also, 'the Abbey' and 'the street' may not require 'the' depending on proper nouns; 'Abbey' and 'street' are used as place names here.

× And I am working as a lab technician and I have a scientific research. In my face.

✓ I am working as a lab technician and I am conducting scientific research in my field.

'I have a scientific research' is incorrect; 'conducting scientific research' is correct. 'In my face' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'in my field'.

× Yes, it is because of a laboratory is.

✓ Yes, it is because the laboratory is modern.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrect. 'Because of a laboratory is' is ungrammatical; it should be 'because the laboratory is' followed by an adjective.

× A modern laboratory and we have a newest. Equipment there.

✓ It is a modern laboratory and we have the newest equipment there.

'A newest' is incorrect; 'newest' is a superlative adjective and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed to be combined.

× One of them is electron microscopy, which my work is related to it and I'm in love with my job.

✓ One of them is electron microscopy, which my work is related to, and I love my job.

Avoid ending sentences with prepositions like 'to it'; instead, 'related to' is sufficient. 'I'm in love with my job' is acceptable but 'I love my job' is more natural here.

× And I like to do.

✓ And I like to do it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'do' requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence.

× Yes, I do because we have there the big garden which have a lot of different types of plans and when I retired you can go to the disk garden and enjoy with these plans.

✓ Yes, I do because we have a big garden there which has a lot of different types of plants, and when I retire, you can go to the garden and enjoy these plants.

'The big garden' should be 'a big garden' unless it is a specific known garden. 'Plans' should be 'plants'. 'When I retired' should be 'when I retire' for future tense. 'Enjoy with' should be 'enjoy' without 'with'. 'Disk garden' is unclear and likely a mishearing; replaced with 'garden'.

× They have a good smelling. Butterflies.

✓ There are good-smelling butterflies.

'Good smelling' should be hyphenated as 'good-smelling' when used as an adjective. The sentence was fragmented; combining into one sentence improves clarity.

× I want to be a good scientist in my field as Anunoby Technologies.

✓ I want to be a good scientist in my field of Nanobiotechnology.

'Anunoby Technologies' is likely a misspelling of 'Nanobiotechnology'. The phrase 'in my field as' is incorrect; 'in my field of' is correct.

× I want to work in a big industries.

✓ I want to work in a big industry.

'Industries' is plural, so 'a' cannot be used. Either use 'a big industry' (singular) or 'big industries' (plural) without 'a'.

× One of them is located in Germany and that's why I want to improve my German language and.

✓ One of them is located in Germany, and that's why I want to improve my German and

'German language' is usually shortened to 'German' when referring to the language. The sentence was incomplete; the conjunction 'and' suggests continuation.

× Continue my PhD in Germany.

✓ I want to continue my PhD in Germany.

The sentence is a fragment; adding 'I want to' completes the sentence and connects it to the previous idea.