Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite short and has some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. For example, mention what you like about parties and what you usually do there.

例: Yes, I like parties because they are a great way to relax and socialize. Usually, I spend weekends with my friends, and we enjoy having dinner together while chatting and listening to music.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, explain briefly why your parents didn't allow you to go to parties, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: When I was a kid, I rarely went to parties because my parents were strict about such events. Therefore, they did not allow me to attend parties, so I usually stayed at home with my family.

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit short and hesitant. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and add more specific details about the party you organized, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I have organized a party before. For example, about 10 years ago, I planned my birthday party with my friends and classmates. We decorated the room, prepared food, and played games, which made the event very enjoyable.

× I'm with my friends some of the weekends we uh.

✓ I spend some weekends with my friends.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. 'I'm with my friends some of the weekends we uh' is incomplete and confusing. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning using proper sentence structure.

× Are with each other and we ate dinner.

✓ We are with each other and we eat dinner.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the context is about regular activities, present tense should be used. 'Are with each other' is incomplete; it should be 'We are with each other'. 'Ate' is past tense; 'eat' is correct for habitual actions.

× When I was a kid, I didn't go to the party because my parents was sensitive for this stuff and we didn't let to go to the party.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to parties because my parents were sensitive about this stuff and they didn't let me go to parties.

'Parents was' is incorrect; 'parents' is plural, so 'were' is correct (subject-verb agreement). 'Sensitive for' should be 'sensitive about'. 'Didn't let to go' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't let me go'. Also, 'party' should be plural 'parties' to match the context.