Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 전개하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I really enjoy going to parties because they are fun and everyone can have a good time. Also, people often dress up nicely, and there is usually a lot of delicious food to enjoy.

提案: 과거 시제 사용이 부적절하고 문장이 어색합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 구체적인 빈도와 이유를 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: When I was a child, I often went to parties, especially on my friends' birthdays, because I enjoyed celebrating with them.

提案: 과거 시제와 문법 오류가 많으며, 문장이 중복되고 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 정확한 문장으로 경험을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I organized a party once when I was a child for my birthday. I invited many friends, and we had a great time together.

× Yes, I do really like going to party because there is very make me fun and everyone can enjoy and set up dress really pretty and gorgeous.

✓ Yes, I really like going to parties because they are very fun and everyone can enjoy themselves and dress up really prettily and gorgeously.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' to match the general statement about liking to go to parties. 'There is very make me fun' is incorrect; it should be 'they are very fun' to describe parties. Also, 'set up dress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'dress up'. 'Pretty' should be changed to the adverb 'prettily' to modify 'dress up'.

× Yes, I do really like going to party because there is very make me fun and everyone can enjoy and set up dress really pretty and gorgeous.

✓ Yes, I really like going to parties because they are very fun and everyone can enjoy themselves and dress up really prettily and gorgeously.

The phrase 'going to party' should be 'going to parties' and 'go into Paris' should be 'go to parties'. The preposition 'to' is used with 'go' when referring to events or places. 'Go into' is incorrect in this context.

× So I like to go into Paris.

✓ So I like to go to parties.

'Paris' is a proper noun referring to a city, but the intended meaning is 'parties'. The plural form 'parties' is needed here to match the context. Also, the preposition 'to' is correct with 'go' for events.

× When I was young, I'm going to party pretty often because since I would like to go into party.

✓ When I was young, I went to parties pretty often because I liked to go to parties.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm going' with past context 'When I was young'. The correct past tense 'I went' should be used. Also, 'would like' is present/future tense and should be 'liked' to match past tense. 'Go into party' should be 'go to parties'.

× When I was young, I'm going to party pretty often because since I would like to go into party.

✓ When I was young, I went to parties pretty often because I liked to go to parties.

'Party' should be plural 'parties' to indicate multiple events. The preposition 'to' is correct with 'go' for events.

× So when on my friend's birthday I went to party a lot.

✓ So on my friend's birthday, I went to parties a lot.

The phrase 'went to party' should be 'went to parties' to indicate multiple events. Also, the word order is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I do organize a party once.

✓ Yes, I organized a party once.

The modal 'do' is incorrectly used with 'organize' in past context. The simple past tense 'organized' should be used to indicate a completed action in the past.

× I still remember when I was kids on my birthday.

✓ I still remember when I was a kid on my birthday.

'Kids' is plural, but the subject is singular 'I'. The correct singular form 'a kid' should be used.

× It was my first time I organized on my party.

✓ It was the first time I organized my party.

The phrase 'organized on my party' is incorrect. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary. Also, 'my first time' should be 'the first time' for correct expression.

× I invite a lot of friends and we have great time.

✓ I invited a lot of friends and we had a great time.

The verbs 'invite' and 'have' should be in past tense 'invited' and 'had' to match the past context. Also, 'great time' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.