Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢派对的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I like parties because they are fun and a great way to meet new people.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明频率和类型。

例: When I was a child, I often attended birthday parties hosted by my parents' friends and colleagues.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达想法，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明组织派对的经历和感受。

例: Yes, I organized my birthday party and my mother's birthday party last year. It was challenging because I was unsure how to plan everything, and I was worried about making it special for her.

× Yes, of course, because I think parties it is very interesting and fascinating.

✓ Yes, of course, because I think parties are very interesting and fascinating.

句子中出现了多余的主语“it”，导致句子结构混乱。应去掉“it”，使主语和谓语一致。

× so the party is a good occasion to make friends with the strange person.

✓ so parties are a good occasion to make friends with strange people.

“party”应使用复数形式“parties”，因为前文提到的是一般情况；“the strange person”应改为复数“strange people”，表示泛指陌生人。

× So I when I was a child, I often took part in some parties such as birthday party.

✓ So when I was a child, I often took part in some parties such as birthday parties.

句子中“so I when I was a child”结构混乱，应去掉多余的“I”；“birthday party”应使用复数形式“birthday parties”，与“some parties”保持一致。

× I think at that time I was very busy because I don't know how to organize it well and also I was worried about her because.

✓ I think at that time I was very busy because I didn't know how to organize it well and also I was worried about her.

句子中“don't know”应使用过去时“didn't know”，与前文“was very busy”时态保持一致；句尾“because”多余，应去掉。