Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋用詞唔夠準確，例如「party hold held」應該係「party held」，「clothes companions」應該係「close companions」。建議你講嘢時要注意語法正確同埋用詞貼切，咁樣會令表達更自然同有效。

例: As an introvert, I usually don't enjoy large parties, but I like small gatherings with my close friends, such as birthday parties where we celebrate and enjoy delicious cake together.

提案: 你嘅答案有啲語法時態錯誤，例如「I usually have」應該用過去式「I usually had」。另外，句子結構有啲重複同冗長，可以用連接詞令句子更流暢。建議你注意時態一致同用連接詞令答案更連貫。

例: When I was a kid, I usually had parties with my family and friends on birthdays, so about three to four parties each year. At these parties, I enjoyed chatting and playing board games with everyone.

提案: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤，例如「16 or 7 years old」唔清楚，應該係「16 or 17 years old」，「did made」應該係「did make」。另外，句子較長且有啲重複，建議你用簡潔嘅句子同正確嘅語法表達。

例: Yes, when I was 17, I organized a party for my best friend's 18th birthday. I invited all her close friends, and we had a special night full of unforgettable memories.

× As an introvert, I'm not a big fan of parties unless it is a party hold held with my close friends.

✓ As an introvert, I'm not a big fan of parties unless it is a party held with my close friends.

'Hold' is the base form of the verb, but here the past participle 'held' is required to form the passive voice. The error is using both 'hold' and 'held' together, which is incorrect. The correct form is 'a party held with my close friends.' 呢度嘅錯誤係用咗兩個動詞形式 'hold held'，正確應該用過去分詞 'held' 來表示被動語態。

× Like birthday parties where we get to celebrate and have some delicious cake together with my clothes companions.

✓ Like birthday parties where we get to celebrate and have some delicious cake together with my close companions.

The word 'clothes' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'close' to describe companions who are intimate or familiar. This is a vocabulary misuse rather than a grammar error but affects clarity. 呢度用錯咗 'clothes'（衣服）代替 'close'（親密嘅），令句子意思唔清楚。

× Back then when I was a kid, I usually have parties with my family and friends during my birthdays or their birthdays.

✓ Back then when I was a kid, I usually had parties with my family and friends during my birthdays or their birthdays.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so the past tense 'had' should be used instead of the present tense 'have'. 呢句講過去嘅習慣動作，應該用過去式 'had'，唔應該用而家式 'have'。

× So approximately 3 to four parties annually and usually at those.

✓ So approximately three to four parties annually, usually at those.

Mixing numeral '3' and word 'four' is inconsistent. Numbers should be expressed uniformly. Also, the sentence is incomplete and awkward; adding a comma and rephrasing improves clarity. 呢度數字表達唔一致，應該全部用文字或全部用數字。另外句子結構唔完整，加入逗號令句子更通順。

× At those parties, I cherished the time with them by having chats and even playing board games.

✓ At those parties, I cherished the time with them by chatting and even playing board games.

The phrase 'having chats' is less natural than 'chatting' in this context. Using the gerund form 'chatting' fits better with 'playing' and improves fluency. 呢度 'having chats' 用法唔自然，改用動名詞 'chatting' 同 'playing' 配合得更好，令句子更流暢。

× Well, I did, when I was 16 or 7 years old, I tried to throw a party for my best friend at her 18 years old birthday 'cause I thought it would be memorable to get her all the close friends and have a special night together.

✓ Well, I did. When I was 16 or 17 years old, I tried to throw a party for my best friend on her 18th birthday because I thought it would be memorable to get all her close friends together and have a special night.

Several issues: '7 years old' should be '17 years old' to make sense; 'at her 18 years old birthday' should be 'on her 18th birthday'; 'cause' is informal, better to use 'because'; 'get her all the close friends' should be 'get all her close friends together'. Also, sentence run-on corrected by splitting. 呢句有多個錯誤：數字錯誤（7應該係17），介詞用錯（應用'on'），非正式縮寫 'cause' 改為 'because'，代詞位置錯誤，句子過長需分開。

× And we did made a lot of unforgettable memories at that night.

✓ And we did make a lot of unforgettable memories that night.

After 'did', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the past tense 'made'. Also, 'at that night' is incorrect; 'that night' without 'at' is correct. 用助動詞 'did' 後面要用動詞原形 'make'，唔可以用過去式 'made'。另外 'at that night' 應該去掉 'at'，用 'that night'。