Party— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like parties?
受験者
I love parties, especially when it's parties with my friends. It is very fun and interesting to hang out with your friends and also there are lavish food and always fancy drinks.
試験官
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
受験者
I am still a teenager and I often have parties because me and my friend is a group of 12 people and they often have birthdays really soon so we often do parties.
試験官
Have you ever organized a party?
受験者
Yes, I am organizing a party tomorrow because it is my birthday, so I am really excited about it. We are planning to serve roast beef and a popular traditional Japanese dish called yakisoba, which is very delicious. I have been preparing everything carefully and I hope my friends will enjoy the food and have a great time.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like parties?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"it's parties"は不自然）や冗長な表現があります。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、文を5文以内にまとめましょう。
例: Yes, I love parties, especially those with my friends. They are fun and interesting because we can hang out together. Also, there is usually lavish food and fancy drinks, which makes the party enjoyable.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
スコア: 60.0提案: 文法の誤り（"me and my friend is"は不正確）や不自然な表現があります。質問に直接答え、具体的な頻度を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。
例: I am still a teenager, and I often have parties with my group of 12 friends. Since many of us have birthdays close to each other, we celebrate together quite frequently.
Have you ever organized a party?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答は具体的で自然ですが、文のつなぎにもう少し接続詞を使うとより論理的になります。例えば、"because"の代わりに"since"や"as"を使うなど工夫しましょう。
例: Yes, I am organizing a party tomorrow since it is my birthday, so I am really excited. We plan to serve roast beef and a popular traditional Japanese dish called yakisoba, which is very delicious. I have been preparing everything carefully, and I hope my friends will enjoy the food and have a great time.
文法
× I love parties, especially when it's parties with my friends.
✓ I love parties, especially when it's a party with my friends.
The pronoun 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and should be followed by a singular noun 'a party' instead of the plural 'parties' to maintain grammatical correctness.
× It is very fun and interesting to hang out with your friends and also there are lavish food and always fancy drinks.
✓ It is very fun and interesting to hang out with your friends and also there is lavish food and always fancy drinks.
The phrase 'there are lavish food' is incorrect because 'food' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'there is' instead of 'there are'.
× I am still a teenager and I often have parties because me and my friend is a group of 12 people and they often have birthdays really soon so we often do parties.
✓ I am still a teenager and I often have parties because my friends and I are a group of 12 people and they often have birthdays really soon so we often have parties.
The subject 'me and my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends and I' as the subject of the sentence. Also, the verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'a group of 12 people'. Additionally, 'do parties' is better expressed as 'have parties'.
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