Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达清晰且内容丰富，但句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't like parties because I'm an introvert and prefer quiet places. Also, loud noise and big crowds make me uncomfortable, so I usually avoid such events.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并提供更具体的细节。

例: I occasionally attended parties as a child, mostly organized by my kindergarten teachers. We usually just ate cake and played simple games.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意主谓一致，简化句子结构，并避免重复表达。

例: No, I haven't organized a party. In China, parties are not very common, and as an introvert, I find loud noise and big crowds overwhelming, so I usually avoid them.

× I used to have parties cry occasionally when I was a kid, mostly held by our kindergarten teachers and we don't have much activities, just eating cakes and playing games just like that.

✓ I used to have parties occasionally when I was a kid, mostly held by our kindergarten teachers, and we didn't have many activities, just eating cakes and playing games like that.

句中“cry”是多余且错误的词，应删除。动词时态应保持过去时态，故“don't”应改为“didn't”。“much activities”应改为“many activities”，因为“activities”是可数名词，需用“many”。

× From an objective perspective, China don't have such party culture, so we don't see party as a kind of necessities.

✓ From an objective perspective, China doesn't have such a party culture, so we don't see parties as a kind of necessity.

主语China是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“doesn't”。“party culture”前应加不定冠词“a”。“party”应用复数形式“parties”，因为指一般的聚会。“necessities”应改为单数“necessity”，因为这里指一种必要性。

× In terms of the subjective reasons, I'm an introvert, so I find loud noise in large crowds are kind of overwhelming, so I try to avoid any kinds of party.

✓ In terms of the subjective reasons, I'm an introvert, so I find loud noise in large crowds kind of overwhelming, so I try to avoid any kind of party.

主语“loud noise in large crowds”是单数，谓语动词应为单数形式，故“are”应删除。短语“any kinds of party”应改为“any kind of party”，因为“kind”后接单数名词。