Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“obsessed”用法不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I really enjoy parties, especially my own birthday celebrations. On that day, my parents usually prepare a delicious cake and give me many thoughtful gifts.

提案: 时态使用不正确，应使用过去时。回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达，并注意时态一致。

例: I used to have parties quite often when I was a child. For instance, I celebrated my birthday every year, and sometimes I organized parties with my best friends.

提案: 回答中时态混用，且表达略显简单。建议使用连贯的句子结构，注意时态一致，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I have. Last year, I organized a birthday party with my best friends, classmates, and my parents. They gave me many thoughtful gifts, and my parents prepared a delicious cake for the celebration.

× I am very obsessed with many kinds of parties.

✓ I am very obsessed with all kinds of parties.

这里'many kinds of parties'用法不太准确，通常表达喜欢各种派对时用'all kinds of parties'更合适，表示所有种类。

× So at that day my parents often give me a birthday cake and many pray many gifts.

✓ So on that day my parents often give me a birthday cake and many, many gifts.

介词'at that day'应改为'on that day'，表示具体某一天；另外，'pray many gifts'是拼写错误，应为'many, many gifts'，表示很多礼物。

× I often have many parties when I was a child.

✓ I often had many parties when I was a child.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，谓语动词应使用过去时'had'，而不是现在时'have'。

× every year on my birthday I must have a birthday celebration, and sometimes I often hold many different parties with my best friends.

✓ Every year on my birthday I would have a birthday celebration, and sometimes I held many different parties with my best friends.

描述过去习惯时，'must'不合适，改用'would'表示过去常做的事；'sometimes I often'重复，保留'sometimes'即可，且后半句谓语应用过去时'held'。

× They give me so many different thoughtful gifts and my parents prepared a delicious cake for me.

✓ They gave me so many different thoughtful gifts and my parents prepared a delicious cake for me.

描述过去发生的事情，谓语动词应使用过去时，'give'应改为'gave'。