Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неполные предложения. Постарайтесь использовать полные и грамматически правильные предложения, а также избегать повторений.

例: Yes, I enjoy attending parties with my friends, especially when the atmosphere is lively and beautifully decorated.

提案: Ваш ответ неполный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует давать более развернутый ответ с использованием связующих слов для логичности.

例: I rarely had parties when I was a child because I was quite introverted. However, I did attend parties organized by my friends occasionally.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется строить предложения более связно и избегать излишних повторов.

例: Yes, I have organized a school party with my classmates during my school years, and I really enjoyed the experience.

× Yes, I like I enjoy to participate in parties with my friends and if party's atmosphere is decorative and beautiful, I.

✓ Yes, I like and enjoy participating in parties with my friends, and if the party's atmosphere is decorative and beautiful, I do.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' (participating), not the infinitive 'to participate'. Also, the sentence structure was incomplete and needed conjunctions and auxiliary verbs for clarity.

× if party's atmosphere is decorative and beautiful, I.

✓ if the party's atmosphere is decorative and beautiful, I do.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'party's atmosphere' to specify a particular party's atmosphere.

× Almost never because I was an introvert child in my childhood. If my friends celebrate their parties I went to.

✓ Almost never because I was an introverted child in my childhood. If my friends celebrated their parties, I went to them.

The verb 'celebrate' should be in the past tense 'celebrated' to match the past context. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed 'them' as the object of 'went to'.

× I was an introvert child in my childhood.

✓ I was an introverted child in my childhood.

The adjective 'introverted' is the correct form to describe a person, not 'introvert' which is a noun.

× Yes, I have. When I studied at school, I organized a party, school party with my schoolmates and I enjoy. I enjoyed this.

✓ Yes, I have. When I studied at school, I organized a school party with my schoolmates and I enjoyed it.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in the past tense 'enjoyed' to match the past context. Also, 'this' should be replaced with 'it' to refer to the party properly.