Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时可以丰富表达，使回答更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't like parties because they make me feel very uncomfortable.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够清晰。建议使用过去时态，并且明确说明频率和原因，使回答更具体。

例: When I was a kid, I usually had one party a year to celebrate my birthday.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误（apartment），语法和表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇，简洁明了地表达观点。

例: No, I have never organized a party because I don't find it meaningful.

× No, I don't like parties because it is make me very uncomfortable.

✓ No, I don't like parties because it makes me very uncomfortable.

这里动词短语错误，'it is make' 应改为 'it makes'。主语是第三人称单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式。

× When I am a kid, I often have a party a year because it is my birthday.

✓ When I was a kid, I often had a party a year because it was my birthday.

描述过去的情况，时态应使用过去时，'am' 应改为 'was'，'have' 应改为 'had'，'is' 应改为 'was'。

× No, I don't apartment in my life because it is not meaningful for me, so I don't organize a party.

✓ No, I haven't had a party in my life because it is not meaningful for me, so I don't organize parties.

原句中 'I don't apartment' 语法错误，应使用 'I haven't had a party' 表示从未举办过派对；'organize a party' 改为复数 'organize parties' 更符合语境。