Party— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like parties?
受験者
Uh, no, I don't like, uh, attending, uh, very big parties, uh, because I am introvert and shy, Uh, I'm not good at speaking in front of a lot of people. And so, uh, when I have to, uh, go to some parties, uh, I always, uh, chat with, uh, my friends, uh, in uh, two or three people.
試験官
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
受験者
Uh, when I was a child, uh, maybe there are parties were uh, held, uh, once in a, a month at least. Umm, in my childhood, uh, there were uh, many friends that surrounding me and uh, we always have uh, uh, anniversary and uh, birthday parties with my friends.
試験官
Have you ever organized a party?
受験者
Yes, when I was in a university, uh, some of my friends and I planned an annual parties, uh, which celebrates the, uh, 60 years old of, uh, my professor. Uh, it was a very memorable, but uh, very difficult to, uh, organize and arrange a schedule. Uh, it was a very bitter memory for me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like parties?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答に多くの「uh」が含まれており、流暢さが損なわれています。また、文がやや冗長で、より自然で簡潔な表現が望まれます。具体的な理由や状況を明確に述べることで、内容の充実も図れます。
例: No, I don't enjoy attending large parties because I am an introvert and feel shy speaking in front of many people. Therefore, when I do go to parties, I prefer to chat quietly with two or three close friends.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答に多くの「uh」や繰り返しがあり、文法的な誤りも見られます。より正確で自然な文を使い、具体的な頻度や状況を明確に述べることが重要です。
例: When I was a child, parties were held at least once a month. I had many friends around me, and we often celebrated anniversaries and birthdays together.
Have you ever organized a party?
スコア: 68.0提案: 多くの「uh」が流暢さを妨げています。また、「annual parties」や「60 years old of my professor」などの表現に誤りがあります。より正確で自然な表現を使い、経験の詳細や感情を明確に伝えましょう。
例: Yes, when I was at university, some friends and I organized an annual party to celebrate my professor's 60th birthday. It was a memorable event, but also challenging to plan and schedule.
文法
× I am introvert and shy
✓ I am an introvert and shy
'Introvert' is a countable noun and requires an article 'an' before it. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
× some of my friends and I planned an annual parties
✓ some of my friends and I planned an annual party
The word 'party' should be singular because 'annual' implies one event per year. Using 'parties' (plural) with 'annual' is incorrect.
× which celebrates the, uh, 60 years old of, uh, my professor
✓ which celebrates the 60th birthday of my professor
The phrase '60 years old of' is incorrect. The correct expression is '60th birthday of' to indicate the professor's age celebration.
× it was a very memorable, but uh, very difficult to, uh, organize and arrange a schedule
✓ it was very memorable, but very difficult to organize and arrange a schedule
The article 'a' before 'very memorable' is unnecessary because 'memorable' is an adjective describing the experience in general, not a countable noun.
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