Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，且注意语法准确性。例如，“enjoying itself”应改为“enjoying myself”。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述对派对的感受。

例: I don't really enjoy parties because they are often noisy and crowded. When I go to one, I find it hard to relax and have fun due to the loud environment.

提案: 回答中时态和语法需要注意，如“held party”应为“hold parties”，且句子较长时应适当分段。可以增加具体细节，使回答更丰富。

例: When I was a child, I only had parties about once a year, usually on my birthday. My parents were very strict and didn't allow me to attend or organize parties often because they thought staying at home was safer.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“May I have”应为“I had”。句子结构不够清晰，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, when I started university, I had more freedom to organize parties. For example, I once planned a memorable party to celebrate my friend's 18th birthday, which was a great experience.

× Parties usually take place in such noisy places and with crowded people there.

✓ Parties usually take place in such noisy places with crowded people there.

句中“and with crowded people there”中的“and”连接不当，导致句子结构混乱。应去掉“and”使句子更通顺。

× When I attend a party, I usually pay more attention to the noisy atmosphere rather than enjoying itself.

✓ When I attend a party, I usually pay more attention to the noisy atmosphere rather than enjoying it.

“itself”是反身代词，指代非人称事物时用“it”，此处应使用“it”而非“itself”。

× When I was little I only held party maybe once a year, usually on my birthday because my parents were so strict and protective and they don't allow me to attend parties or held parties so often.

✓ When I was little I only held parties maybe once a year, usually on my birthday because my parents were so strict and protective and they didn't allow me to attend parties or hold parties so often.

“held party”中“party”应为复数形式“parties”，因为表示多次活动。

× When I was little I only held party maybe once a year, usually on my birthday because my parents were so strict and protective and they don't allow me to attend parties or held parties so often.

✓ When I was little I only held parties maybe once a year, usually on my birthday because my parents were so strict and protective and they didn't allow me to attend parties or hold parties so often.

句中“don't allow”和“held parties”时态不一致，描述过去应使用过去时“didn't allow”和动词原形“hold”。

× They think the best way to keep safe is just stay at home.

✓ They think the best way to keep safe is just staying at home.

“is”后接动名词形式，表示“保持安全的最好方式是待在家里”，应使用“staying”而非“stay”。

× May I have a very memorable party for my friends to celebrate her 18th birthday.

✓ I had a very memorable party for my friend to celebrate her 18th birthday.

“May I”用于请求许可，不符合语境，应使用过去时陈述句“I had”。

× May I have a very memorable party for my friends to celebrate her 18th birthday.

✓ I had a very memorable party for my friend to celebrate her 18th birthday.

“friends”应为单数“friend”，因为后文指代“her 18th birthday”，说明是一个朋友。