Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如"I love have a party"应为"I love having a party"，以及"Party can not only strengthen... but also a way to relax myself"结构不完整。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, definitely. I love having parties with my friends because they not only strengthen our relationships but also help me relax after a busy week.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如"when I were a kid"应为"when I was a kid"，"considered their party is too noisy for to them"表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和介词使用，使表达更准确。

例: Actually, I didn't have parties very often when I was a kid because my parents thought they were too noisy. So, I usually went to my friends' houses when they had parties.

提案: 回答较为简洁，但"my parents consider it too noisy"时态不一致，应为"considered"。建议增加一些细节说明，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: No, I have never organized a party because my parents considered it too noisy. Therefore, I usually attend parties at my friends' houses instead.

× I love have a party with my friends.

✓ I love having a party with my friends.

动词love后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里应使用having而不是have。

× Party can not only strengthen the relationship between me and my friend, but also a way to relax myself.

✓ Parties can not only strengthen the relationship between me and my friends, but also be a way to relax myself.

party应使用复数形式parties，因为这里指的是一般的聚会。friend也应为复数friends，表示多个朋友。

× Party can not only strengthen the relationship between me and my friend, but also a way to relax myself.

✓ Parties can not only strengthen the relationship between me and my friends, but also be a way to relax myself.

句中缺少动词be，导致结构不完整。'but also a way'应改为'but also be a way'。

× Actually I didn't have a party very often when I were a kid because my parents considered their party is too noisy for to them.

✓ Actually I didn't have a party very often when I was a kid because my parents considered their party was too noisy for them.

主语I对应的be动词过去式是was，不是were。句中also存在时态不一致，considered后面应接过去时was。'for to them'中to多余，应去掉。

× Actually I didn't have a party very often when I were a kid because my parents considered their party is too noisy for to them.

✓ Actually I didn't have parties very often when I was a kid because my parents considered their parties were too noisy for them.

party应使用复数parties，表示多次聚会。parents的party应对应复数parties。

× Actually I didn't have a party very often when I were a kid because my parents considered their party is too noisy for to them.

✓ Actually I didn't have parties very often when I was a kid because my parents considered their parties were too noisy for them.

considered是过去时，后面从句也应使用过去时态，is应改为were。

× So I always have party my friends house.

✓ So I always have parties at my friends' house.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词at表示地点，friends应为复数所有格friends'。

× So I always have party my friends house.

✓ So I always have parties at my friends' house.

缺少介词at，表示在某地。friends应为复数所有格friends'。

× So that depends how often my friends have a party.

✓ So it depends on how often my friends have a party.

depends后应接介词on，且句子缺少主语it。

× No, as I mentioned before, my parents consider it too noisy, so I usually go to my friend's house to have the party.

✓ No, as I mentioned before, my parents consider it too noisy, so I usually go to my friend's house to have a party.

the party暗指特定聚会，但此处应泛指聚会，使用a party更合适。