Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'I enjoy parties' instead of 'I enjoy party'. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'our special occasion' and 'added'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy parties because they provide a great chance to socialize and relax with my family and friends. For example, birthday parties and festival celebrations are special occasions that make me feel excited and help me enjoy my time more.

提案: Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'I used to have parties quite often' instead of 'Are used to have party'. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'answering then my friendship'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I used to have parties quite often when I was a kid because they allowed me to stay in touch with my family and strengthen my friendships. For example, my family usually celebrated my birthday with a party because it was a special occasion.

提案: Improve your grammar and clarity. For example, say 'I organized my sister's birthday party' instead of 'I used to organize a party'. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'prepare sing for'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I organized my sister's birthday party. My family usually celebrated it at night, so I helped my mom prepare decorations and food for the event.

× Yes, I enjoy party quite a lot because they offer a great opportunity to socialize and relax with my family and friends.

✓ Yes, I enjoy parties quite a lot because they offer a great opportunity to socialize and relax with my family and friends.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to more than one occasion. Using the plural form matches the context of multiple events and agrees with the plural pronoun 'they'. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when talking about more than one.

× For example, birthday party or festival celebration, our special occasion because they often make me feel exciting an more interesting to enjoy the time added.

✓ For example, birthday parties or festival celebrations are special occasions because they often make me feel excited and more interested to enjoy the time.

The nouns 'birthday party' and 'festival celebration' should be plural to match the general examples. 'Our' should be 'are' to form the correct verb phrase. 'Exciting' should be 'excited' to describe feelings, and 'an' is incorrect before 'more interesting'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Are used to have party quite often when I was a kid, I'm having party would allow me to stay in touch with my family, answering then my friendship with my friends.

✓ I used to have parties quite often when I was a kid. Having parties allowed me to stay in touch with my family and maintain my friendships with my friends.

'Are used to have' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'used to have' for past habits. 'Party' should be plural 'parties'. 'I'm having party' is incorrect; it should be 'Having parties' to express a general past action. 'Answering then my friendship' is unclear and corrected to 'maintain my friendships'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× For example, my family usually celebrate a birthday party for me because it is a special.

✓ For example, my family usually celebrates a birthday party for me because it is special.

The verb 'celebrate' should be 'celebrates' to agree with the singular subject 'my family'. The article 'a' before 'special' is unnecessary because 'special' is an adjective here. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× Yes, I used to organize a party.

✓ Yes, I used to organize parties.

'A party' should be plural 'parties' to indicate more than one event or to generalize the action. 'Used to' indicates past habitual actions, so plural form fits better in this context.

× It was my sister birthday party, so my family usually had celebration this party at night.

✓ It was my sister's birthday party, so my family usually had a celebration for this party at night.

'Sister birthday party' should be 'sister's birthday party' to show possession. 'Had celebration' needs an article 'a' to be correct. 'Had a celebration for this party' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So to deal with that I need to help my mom to prepare sing for.

✓ So to deal with that, I needed to help my mom prepare the singing.

The phrase 'prepare sing for' is incorrect. It should be 'help my mom prepare the singing' or 'help my mom prepare songs'. Also, the tense is adjusted to past 'needed' to match the context. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary here.