Party— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够流畅且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I don't like parties because I find it hard to socialize with many people. Also, I feel uncomfortable in such crowded environments.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误。建议先明确回答频率，再补充具体细节，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I didn't have parties regularly as a child. Usually, I had small gatherings with two or three friends on weekends when we went to the park.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子描述经历和感受，避免重复和不完整的句子。

例: Yes, I organized a party in primary school. It was a bad experience because things didn't go as I expected, and my classmates were not very cooperative.

× And I think it's very hard to hold such a such a. Stayed on the varsity activity.

✓ And I think it's very hard to hold such a varsity activity.

句子结构混乱，重复使用了“such a”，且“Stayed on the varsity activity”不符合语法，应改为“hold such a varsity activity”以表达正确意思。

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

原句中“a party”单数不符合习惯表达，通常用复数形式“parties”表示频率。

× I think I don't have a regular schedule about. About Hammer part having a party because, uh, when you're.

✓ I think I didn't have a regular schedule for having parties because, uh, when I was a kid,

句子结构不完整且混乱，时态应与提问保持一致，使用过去时，且表达应连贯完整。

× Are you really held a party with with my two or three friends on weekends when we want to go to the park?

✓ I really held a party with my two or three friends on weekends when we wanted to go to the park.

句子结构错误，“Are you really held”不符合语法，应改为“I really held”，且时态应为过去时，动词“want”应改为“wanted”。

× Definitely yes, I have had organized a party will not be my primary school.

✓ Definitely yes, I have organized a party when I was in primary school.

时态使用错误，“have had organized”不正确，应使用现在完成时“have organized”，且“will not be”不合适，应改为“when I was”。

× I think is a really terrible man memory because I think everything is out of my expectations and my my classmates. Was he?

✓ I think it is a really terrible memory because everything was out of my expectations and my classmates were surprised.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语“it”，“man memory”应为“memory”，“was he?”不合适，应改为“were surprised”以表达正确意思。