App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javob ravonroq va lo‘nda bo‘lishi kerak. Avvalo savolga bevosita javob bering (qaysi ilovani ishlatganingizni ayting), so‘ng sababini qisqacha tushuntiring. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, because, so, when) to‘g‘ri va tabiiy foydalaning. Grammatik xatolarni tuzating (masalan, “in order to chatting” o‘rniga “to chat”). 3–4 gapdan ortiq bo‘lmasin va ortiqcha takrorlardan saqlaning.

例: Recently I have mostly used Telegram. I use it on weekends or when I have free time because it’s convenient for chatting with friends and relatives. I also join channels there to follow news and events.

提案: Savolga aniq javob bering: qaysi turdagi ilovalar sizni qiziqtiradi (masalan, ijtimoiy media, ilhomlantiruvchi ilovalar). Qo‘shimcha ma’lumotlarda aniq misollar keltiring va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri jumlalar tuzing. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlar (for example, because, so) ishlating va 3–4 gapni o‘tkazib yubormang. Noto‘g‘ri so‘zlarni almashtiring ("watching it" o‘rniga "look at" yoki "browse").

例: I’m usually interested in inspirational apps like Pinterest. I often browse Pinterest for ideas about fashion, recipes and home decor because it’s easy to find pictures and tutorials. When I pick up my phone, I usually open Pinterest first to get ideas.

提案: Javob aniq va qisqa bo‘lishi kerak: kimdan yoki qayerdan ilovalar haqida eshitishingizni ayting va sababi yoki misol keltiring. Grammatik va so‘z tanlash xatolarini to‘g‘ring (masalan, "she spent nearly dear daily life on the phone" noaniq — "she spends a lot of time on her phone"). Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalaning (for example, because, so).

例: I usually learn about new apps from my sister because she spends a lot of time on her phone. For example, she often recommends apps by showing me useful features or sending links in messages.

提案: Savolga qisqacha va ravon javob bering: kelajakda qaysi turdagi ilovani ishlatmoqchi ekanligingizni ayting va nima uchun. Grammatikani va so‘z tartibini tuzating (masalan, "I play mobile games to relax"), va ortiqcha takrorlardan qoching. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlar bilan sababni tushuntiring va bir misol keltiring.

例: In the future I’d like to use mobile gaming apps to relax during breaks. I enjoy casual puzzle or strategy games because they help me unwind, and if I like a game I might play it every day for a short time.

× I don't have enough time. For this reason I didn't use most of the time from my phone, but if I have time or the weekend some festivals, this time I use Telegram because it's very useful for in order to chatting with my friends or my relatives.

✓ I don't have enough time. For this reason I don't use my phone most of the time, but if I have time or during weekends or festivals, I use Telegram because it's very useful for chatting with my friends and relatives.

The student mixed past and present incorrectly and used awkward time phrases. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'don't use' and 'use'. 'Most of the time' should follow the verb. 'During weekends or festivals' is a correct time expression. 'In order to chatting' is wrong; use the base form after 'for' or simply 'for chatting' or 'to chat'. Also use 'and' rather than 'or' before 'my relatives' for clarity.

× From negotiative, Pinterest is very useful and very interesting for me because I can find everything that is I would like to watching it and when I take my phone, firstly I turn on the Pinterest.

✓ Regarding recommendations, Pinterest is very useful and interesting for me because I can find everything I would like to watch, and when I pick up my phone, I always open Pinterest first.

'From negotiative' is incorrect; use 'Regarding recommendations' or similar. 'Very useful and very interesting' is repetitive—'useful and interesting' is enough. 'That is I would like to watching it' mixes structures: use 'everything I would like to watch'. 'When I take my phone' should be 'when I pick up my phone'. 'Firstly I turn on the Pinterest' should be 'I always open Pinterest first'—use adverb placement and correct verb collocation.

× Most of the time I just hear about the apps from my sister because she spent nearly dear daily life on the phone and she watching and try to know about all of us.

✓ Most of the time I just hear about apps from my sister because she spends almost her whole day on the phone; she watches and tries to find out about new apps.

Tenses and word choices are wrong. Use present simple 'spends' for habitual actions. 'Nearly dear daily life' is nonsensical; use 'almost her whole day'. 'She watching and try' needs verbs with correct agreement: 'she watches and tries'. 'To know about all of us' likely means 'to find out about new apps'—clarify and correct object.

× In my opinion, if I have enough time or I take a break, this time I take mobile phone game because this time I can relax and I can enjoy for myself. If I interested it, I try to game it on every day.

✓ In my opinion, if I have enough time or take a break, I would play mobile phone games because I can relax and enjoy myself. If I am interested, I try to play them every day.

Conditionals and verb forms are incorrect. For hypothetical or possible future actions use 'would' or present conditional: 'I would play'. 'Take mobile phone game' should be 'play mobile phone games'. 'Enjoy for myself' is wrong; use 'enjoy myself'. 'If I interested it' needs 'If I am interested'. 'Try to game it on every day' should be 'try to play them every day'—use correct verb and plural pronoun for games.