History— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by saying, 'Yes, I studied Thai history and some basic global history in high school.' This is clearer and more fluent.

例: Yes, I studied Thai history and some basic global history in high school.

提案: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. You can say, 'I learned Thai history in compulsory high school classes, which helped me understand Thailand's cultural heritage.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I learned Thai history in compulsory high school classes, which helped me understand Thailand's cultural heritage.

提案: Improve grammar and coherence. Use linking words and complete sentences, for example: 'Learning history allows us to understand how the world has changed over time, and it may help us predict future events.'

例: Learning history allows us to understand how the world has changed over time, and it may help us predict future events.

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. For example, say: 'Yes, I think learning history is important because it helps us make better decisions and avoid repeating past mistakes.'

例: Yes, I think learning history is important because it helps us make better decisions and avoid repeating past mistakes.

× Yes, I studied in my high school about Thai history and a bit about basic of global history.

✓ Yes, I studied Thai history and a bit about the basics of global history in my high school.

The phrase 'studied in my high school about' is awkward; the correct structure is 'studied [subject] in my high school'. Also, 'basic' should be plural 'basics' and preceded by 'the' to specify the topic. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I studied Thai history from my class in high school and which is compulsory in every high school and it allows us to understand the cultural heritage of Thai.

✓ I studied Thai history in my high school class, which is compulsory in every high school and allows us to understand the cultural heritage of Thailand.

The phrase 'from my class in high school and which' is incorrect; 'which' should directly refer to 'class'. Also, 'cultural heritage of Thai' should be 'cultural heritage of Thailand' for correct noun usage. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Learning history allow us to know how the world shift into today and.

✓ Learning history allows us to know how the world has shifted to today.

The subject 'Learning history' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' not 'allow'. Also, 'shift' should be in present perfect 'has shifted' to indicate the change up to now. The sentence ending with 'and.' is incomplete and corrected accordingly.

× It may help us predict what could happen in the future.

✓ It can help us predict what could happen in the future.

While 'may' indicates possibility, 'can' is more appropriate here to express ability or potential. This makes the sentence clearer and more natural in context.

× Yes, I think it is. I think it helps and to make decisions and to avoid any repeating mistakes.

✓ Yes, I think it is. I think it helps us make decisions and avoid repeating mistakes.

The phrase 'helps and to make decisions and to avoid' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'helps us make decisions and avoid repeating mistakes' without 'to' after 'helps' and with proper parallelism. This correction improves sentence flow and grammar.