Stories— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意动词搭配。

例: Yes, when I was young, I really enjoyed listening to my mother tell stories, especially before going to sleep. I remember she once told me the story of Snow White, which left a deep impression on me.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的动词短语，避免重复，并注意句子流畅性。

例: To be honest, I prefer listening to stories rather than reading them myself. For example, before sleeping, I usually listen to my mother tell stories, which helps me sleep more peacefully.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和介词。

例: No, I never wrote stories when I was a child because I wasn't good at it. Instead, I preferred listening to my mother's stories, which made me feel relaxed and comfortable.

提案: 回答内容重复且表达不清晰，故事名称错误。建议准确表达喜欢的故事类型，避免重复，并正确使用故事名称。

例: Well, in my childhood, I preferred listening to romantic stories, such as Snow White and Cinderella, which tell the love stories between a princess and a prince. These stories really appealed to me.

× Yes, when I was young I really liked to listen my listen to my mother to tell the stories, especially before sleeping.

✓ Yes, when I was young I really liked listening to my mother tell stories, especially before sleeping.

动词listen后面应使用动名词形式listening，并且listen后面需要加介词to，表示“听某人讲故事”。

× I really liked to listen my listen to my mother to tell the stories, especially before sleeping.

✓ I really liked listening to my mother tell stories, especially before sleeping.

动词listen后面应加介词to，表示“听某人讲故事”，原句缺少介词to。

× I remember that once she told me a story about the Snow White which really impressed me.

✓ I remember that once she told me a story about Snow White which really impressed me.

“Snow White”作为专有名词前不需要加定冠词the。

× To be honest, instead of reading them by myself, I prefer to listen them to listen to them.

✓ To be honest, instead of reading them by myself, I prefer to listen to them.

动词listen后应加介词to，且“listen them”是不正确的搭配，应为“listen to them”。

× For example, when before sleeping, I usually listen to my mother to tell some stories which help me sleep more peaceful.

✓ For example, before sleeping, I usually listen to my mother tell some stories which help me sleep more peacefully.

“listen to my mother to tell”结构不正确，应为“listen to my mother tell”；“peaceful”是形容词，修饰动词sleep应使用副词形式“peacefully”。

× No to no. To be honest, I'm not good at writing stories. So instead of writing them, I prefer to listen to the stories by by my mother.

✓ No, to be honest, I'm not good at writing stories. So instead of writing them, I prefer to listen to the stories told by my mother.

“listen to the stories by by my mother”中“by by”重复且结构不完整，应改为“listen to the stories told by my mother”。

× It would make me more relaxed and more comfortable.

✓ It makes me more relaxed and more comfortable.

此句描述习惯性事实，时态应使用一般现在时。

× Well, to be honest, in my childhood I prefer to listen to some loving stories, for example the Snow White, Cingular and so forth, which told the stories between loving stories between the Princess and the Prince, which really appeals me.

✓ Well, to be honest, in my childhood I preferred to listen to some loving stories, for example Snow White, Cinderella and so forth, which told stories about love between the Princess and the Prince, which really appealed to me.

描述过去的习惯应使用过去时；“prefer”应改为“preferred”；“appeals me”搭配错误，应为“appealed to me”；“the Snow White”及“Cingular”拼写错误，应为“Snow White”和“Cinderella”；“which told the stories between loving stories between”结构混乱，应简化为“which told stories about love between”。