Stories— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to answer the question more clearly and naturally by using complete sentences and explaining your answer. Also, avoid confusing references like 'my Minecraft' which is unclear. You can mention specific types of stories you liked and why.

例: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child, especially adventure stories and fairy tales because they sparked my imagination.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. You should directly answer the question by stating your preference and giving reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details.

例: I prefer reading stories because it allows me to imagine the scenes in my own way, and I can read at my own pace.

提案: Your answer is clear but very brief. To improve, you can add a reason or explain more about your experience to make your answer more natural and engaging.

例: No, I didn't write stories when I was a child because I preferred reading and playing games instead.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks detail. Try to specify the types of stories you enjoy and explain why. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I like stories that involve adventure and creativity, similar to the themes in Minecraft, because they allow me to explore new worlds.

× Yes, I love story like my Minecraft.

✓ Yes, I love stories like my Minecraft.

The word 'story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to stories in general, not just one. Using the plural form matches the question about stories in childhood.

× I read the Minecraft.

✓ I read Minecraft.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'Minecraft' because it is a proper noun (a game title). Also, 'Minecraft' is uncountable here, so no article is needed.

× I like story like Minecraft.

✓ I like stories like Minecraft.

Similar to the first correction, 'story' should be plural 'stories' to correctly express liking stories in general, not just one.