Stories— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking tests.

例: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child because they were very entertaining. For example, I enjoyed fairy tales that sparked my imagination and helped me learn new words.

提案: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more concise. Also, avoid informal language like 'gonna' and 'cause'.

例: I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because reading helps me learn new vocabulary and understand the language better. Moreover, reading allows me to go at my own pace and think about the story.

提案: Be careful with grammar; use 'did write' instead of 'did wrote'. Also, try to expand your answer with more details and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I wrote several stories as a child because I enjoyed expressing my feelings through writing. Writing stories was fun and helped me improve my creativity.

提案: Make sure to use correct grammar and plural forms, for example, 'mysterious stories' instead of 'mysterious story'. Also, try to explain your reasons more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'give me the motivate'.

例: I enjoy reading mysterious stories because they are exciting and keep me interested until the end. For instance, detective novels often have surprising endings that motivate me to keep reading.

× Yes, I did wrote more than one story when I was a kid because I like expressing my feelings by writing them in a story.

✓ Yes, I wrote more than one story when I was a kid because I like expressing my feelings by writing them in a story.

The auxiliary 'did' is used to form the past tense question or negative, so the main verb should be in its base form. 'Did wrote' is incorrect; it should be 'did write' or simply 'wrote' without 'did'. Here, 'I wrote' is correct.

× I enjoy reading mysterious story because they are fun and they give me the motivate to finish all the story instead of reading a boring story that I cannot finish.

✓ I enjoy reading mysterious stories because they are fun and they give me the motivation to finish all the stories instead of reading a boring story that I cannot finish.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to agree with the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'the motivate' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'motivation'. Additionally, 'all the story' should be 'all the stories' to match plural form.