Stories— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child. Listening to fairy tales was one of my favorite memories because they sparked my imagination and made me happy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng để thể hiện ý kiến của mình.

例: I definitely prefer listening to stories rather than reading them because it helps me relax and I can imagine the scenes better when someone tells the story.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích rõ ràng về trải nghiệm của mình.

例: No, I did not write stories when I was a child because I usually spent my time playing outside with my friends. Writing was not my favorite activity back then.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về thể loại truyện yêu thích và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

例: I really enjoy stories about family and love because they show real emotions and help me understand relationships better.

× I love story in my dry hurt girls is a part of one of memories in my childhood that.

✓ I love stories in my childhood; they are a part of my memories.

The word 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the context. 'Dry hurt girls' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; it is omitted for clarity. 'One of memories' should be 'one of my memories' or simply 'my memories'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love story in my dry hurt girls is a part of one of memories in my childhood that.

✓ I love stories from my childhood; they are a part of my memories.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'dry hurt girls' which is unclear; replacing with 'from my childhood' is more appropriate. Prepositions should correctly indicate relationships; here 'from' indicates origin of stories.

× Amrou apps, I absolutely prefer listening to story Dan writting, because listening will in breaks my Gran well, and then also the very special to me today.

✓ Among apps, I absolutely prefer listening to stories than writing, because listening breaks my brain well, and it is also very special to me today.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' to match the context. 'Dan writting' is corrected to 'than writing' to show comparison. 'Will in breaks my Gran well' is corrected to 'breaks my brain well' for meaning and grammar.

× Amrou apps, I absolutely prefer listening to story Dan writting, because listening will in breaks my Gran well, and then also the very special to me today.

✓ Among apps, I absolutely prefer listening to stories rather than writing, because listening helps me relax, and it is also very special to me today.

The phrase 'will in breaks' is incorrect; 'helps me relax' is a better expression. Prepositions and phrases should be used correctly to convey intended meaning.

× Finding right the story when I was a child because most of the time of my I usually spend my time going out with my friends.

✓ I did not write stories when I was a child because most of the time I usually spent going out with my friends.

The verb tense should be past tense 'did not write' and 'spent' to match the past time frame. 'Finding right the story' is incorrect and replaced with 'did not write stories' for clarity.

× Not actually I enjoy writing a story when I was a child.

✓ Actually, I did not enjoy writing stories when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past time 'when I was a child'. It should be past tense 'did not enjoy' to be consistent.

× I absolutely love the kind of stories. Is love a family or a love of lower because is have? A lot of.

✓ I absolutely love stories about family or love because there are a lot of them.

'The kind of stories' should be 'stories' or 'kinds of stories'. 'Is love a family or a love of lower' is unclear and corrected to 'stories about family or love'. 'Is have? A lot of.' is corrected to 'there are a lot of them' for grammatical correctness.