Stories— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を簡潔にし、文法と語彙を正しく使う練習をしましょう。例えば、主語と動詞の一致、冠詞の使い方に注意してください。

例: Yes, I loved stories a lot when I was a child. My favorite story was about a child named Harry Potter. I enjoyed it because it was a fantasy story, which I really liked.

提案: 回答が意味不明で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に説明することも重要です。

例: I prefer reading stories because it helps me learn new vocabulary and understand the latest content better.

提案: 回答が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。過去形を正しく使い、文章をつなげて具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I wrote stories about my life in my Japanese studies class. My teacher gave me an award for my writing.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。好きなジャンルとその理由を明確に述べ、文をつなげて話す練習をしましょう。

例: I like fantasy stories because they allow me to dream and imagine ideal characters and worlds.

× A large stories very much.

✓ I liked stories very much.

The phrase 'A large stories' is incorrect because 'stories' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'A'. The correct form is 'I liked stories very much.' to express liking stories in general.

× My favorite story is.

✓ My favorite story is Harry Potter.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object of 'My favorite story is'. It should specify the story name to complete the sentence.

× A child was Holly Potter.

✓ The main character was Harry Potter.

The sentence is awkward and incorrect. 'A child was Holly Potter' is not proper English. It should be 'The main character was Harry Potter.' to correctly identify the story's protagonist.

× It was very. Very good stories because the fantasy I love.

✓ It was a very good story because I love fantasy.

The sentence has incorrect structure and word usage. 'Very good stories' should be singular 'story' to match 'It was'. Also, 'because the fantasy I love' is incorrect; it should be 'because I love fantasy'.

× So I attracted that stories.

✓ So I was attracted to that story.

The sentence is grammatically incorrect. 'I attracted that stories' is wrong; the correct passive form is 'I was attracted to that story'.

× I prefer reading stories becauses following the latest.

✓ I prefer reading stories because I can follow the latest ones.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'following the latest' is incomplete; it should be 'I can follow the latest ones'.

× Could be a. Bear I effect on the? Leadings.

✓ It could have a better effect on my reading.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems to attempt to say 'It could have a better effect on my reading'.

× It's can be. More vocabulary.

✓ It can help me learn more vocabulary.

'It's can be' is incorrect; 'It can help me learn more vocabulary' is the correct expression.

× He was up.

✓ I grew up.

'He was up' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'I grew up' to indicate childhood.

× I Japanese studies I wrote up stories about my.

✓ When I studied Japanese, I wrote stories about my life.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. It should be restructured to 'When I studied Japanese, I wrote stories about my life.'.

× So I. I got up. Awad by teacher.

✓ So I got an award from my teacher.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I got up Awad by teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'I got an award from my teacher'.

× I like fantasy be cause.

✓ I like fantasy because...

'be cause' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× I dreamed of.

✓ I dreamed of it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'I dreamed of' requires an object.

× I waa bot or like something like that so fantasy can.

✓ I want to be like something like that, so I like fantasy.

The sentence is unclear and fragmented. It should be rephrased to express desire and preference clearly.

× The. Ideal person I want.

✓ The ideal person I want to be.

The sentence is incomplete and fragmented; it should be 'The ideal person I want to be.'