Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobni qisqaroq va aniqroq qiling; grammatika va so‘z tanloviga eʼtibor bering. Masalan, undosh va olmoshlarni to‘g‘ri ishlating (plant — u/it, not him), vaqt zamoniga mos keladigan fe’llarni qo‘llang (I don't keep / I didn't keep). Bir boshlang‘ich gap bilan to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob bering, keyin 1-2 qo‘llab‑quvvatlovchi maʼlumot bering.

例: No, I don't keep any plants at home because I find them uninteresting and I don't have time to care for them. I work long hours, so I rarely stay at home long enough to look after plants.

提案: Vaqt formalariga eʼtibor qarating (past simple for past actions: I tried, I was interested). Qayta ishlanishni va aniq ifodani taʼminlash uchun 2-3 gapga cheklang. Shaxs va jins uchun 'it' so‘zini ishlating va 'take of my time' kabi iboralarni tuzating: 'takes up my time'.

例: When I was young, I tried to grow some flowers at home because I was interested in gardening. However, now I don't enjoy it because it takes up too much of my time and I don't have the leisure to look after them.

提案: Grammatika va so‘z tartibiga eʼtibor bering: savolga oddiy va to‘g‘ri «Yes/No» bilan boshlang va qisqa izoh bering. Feʼllarni to‘g‘ri shaklda ishlating (I don't know, I haven't learned). Aniq misollar keltiring (masalan, what your mom knows).

例: No, I don't know much about growing plants because I never learned how to care for them. My mother, however, knows a lot about flowers and she grows several kinds at home, such as roses and chrysanthemums.

提案: Gapni aniqroq va tabiiyroq qilib tuzing. Umumiy qarashlar haqida gapirganda, ishonch bilan so‘zlang va umumlashmalarni ehtiyotkorlik bilan ishlating (not every girl). Fikrni bog‘lash uchun linking words ishlating (for example, generally, often).

例: Yes, Chinese people often give plants or flowers as gifts, especially on special occasions like birthdays or festivals. For example, many people give flowers to show appreciation, and recipients are usually pleased to receive them.

× Unfortunately, no, I didn't keep plans at my home because I didn't find it interesting and also I don't have enough time to take care of him. First reason I didn't keep it.

✓ Unfortunately, no, I didn't keep plants at my home because I didn't find it interesting and I didn't have enough time to take care of them. The main reason was that I didn't keep them.

The student mixed past and present tenses and used incorrect nouns/pronouns. Use past tense consistently when talking about past habits: 'didn't have' instead of 'don't have'. 'Plans' is a typo; correct word is 'plants'. Use plural pronoun 'them' for plants and avoid 'him'. Also clarify sentence structure: 'The main reason was that...' improves coherence.

× When I was young, I try to keep some flowers at my house because this time I'm very interesting to grow up it.

✓ When I was young, I tried to keep some flowers at my house because at that time I was very interested in growing them.

This sentence refers to a past time so use past tense 'tried' and 'was interested'. 'I'm very interesting' is incorrect: use 'I was very interested'. Use 'interested in' followed by gerund 'growing' and the plural pronoun 'them' for 'flowers'.

× But nowadays I didn't like it because it's the take of my time and I don't have leisure time to take care of him.

✓ But nowadays I don't like it because it takes up my time and I don't have leisure time to take care of them.

'Nowadays' indicates present, so use present tense 'don't like' and 'takes up'. 'It's the take of my time' is unnatural; use 'it takes up my time'. Use plural 'them' for flowers instead of 'him'.

× Unfortunately no, I didn't think to plant some flowers or some trees and first reason I didn't learn about it.

✓ Unfortunately, no, I didn't think of planting flowers or trees, and the main reason I didn't learn about it was that I wasn't interested.

Use 'think of doing' not 'think to'. Clarify cause with 'the main reason' and maintain past tense. Also add a plausible clause explaining reason to make sentence complete.

× But my mom know anything about the flowers because she keep some of flowers at my home.

✓ But my mom knows something about flowers because she keeps some at our home.

Subject-verb agreement: 'mom' requires third person singular verbs 'knows' and 'keeps'. Use 'something about flowers' instead of 'know anything about the flowers'. Use 'some' without 'of' before 'flowers' and 'our home' is more natural.

× I told the years Chinese people send some plans as a gift, especially flowers.

✓ In the past years, Chinese people have sent plants as gifts, especially flowers.

Use present perfect 'have sent' to describe a trend over time. 'Told the years' is incorrect; use 'In the past years' or 'Over the years'. Correct 'plans' to 'plants'.

× From a perspective every girl when they take it flowers as a gift, will be very happy.

✓ From one perspective, every girl who receives flowers as a gift will be very happy.

Sentence structure and relative clause needed: use 'who receives' instead of 'when they take it flowers'. Use singular/plural agreement: 'every girl' with singular verb 'will be'. 'Receives flowers' is natural phrasing.